/ Video Games / Dragons Among Heroes
Synopsis
You've probably heard this before. A person dies and is reincarnated in a different world with a system. Well it wasn't just me that died this time. My name is Devin Price and this is my new life in a different world with a system.
This is my first venture in writing instead of reading and is mostly for my own self indulgence. If you like it, great! If not there's plenty more so just keep looking. This will be the first story in what will hopefully be a trilogy. I do use system topics that, as far as I know, no one else has or is currently using.
I do not own any of the characters or domains except for my OCs. All copyrights belong to their owners. I also don't own the cover image. If the owner wants it removed I will gladly remove it.
Tags
Fans
-
![ShaneMichaels]()
ShaneMichaels Contributed 102 -
![ArcticRage]()
ArcticRage Contributed 30 -
![KooiKitsunee]()
KooiKitsunee Contributed 27
Weekly Power Status
-- Power
Ranking 
-- Power
stone You May Also Like
35Reviews
4.26
- Translation Quality
- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Write a review
All in all a great work so far. 1. English and grammar are on point not to say perfect but it's probably a 9.5 out of 10. 2. The plot is amazing and the build of each arc was amazing with no rushed plot or awkward transitions 3. The character dialogues are amazing and there is no forced interaction or forced relation to say of, well maybe the first convo betwenn mc and jennifer walters could have gone a bit better lol, 4. For a novel that has a system theme there is little to be left desired as the author makes a great way of letting the reader know of the mc's advancement without unnecessary info dumps and character sheet pop ups. 5. The mc in my opinion is very likeable and realistic to most mc's who are normal in their own world but become sociopaths/psychopaths in their reincarnation or something. 6. The mc isn't a bimbo, i mean he flirts a little here and there but has a good head on his shoulder's and his character is really good. So if you are reading this review than in my humble opinion, this would be one of the top ff in this app i've ever read and that's saying something cuz i've read a good amount of ff's here.
Author has no mention of how the spirits work the mc turns from a pathetic weakling who cant even ask out his school crush to all of a sudden being able to flirt and go and casual dates with grown women being able to « tease » them which i dont even need to mention how cringe the dialogue is please tone it down and keep it in your pants mc and the fact he takes everything so nonchalantly also seven chapters in he has jus been sleepinh trash author and trash story😐
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Ok here's my review about this story Writing quality is awesome and easy to read The main characters for now is good and likeable And story development is good than I expected So yeah overall this novel is worth to read for you, and I hope author wouldn't drop this novel
(google translator) - The MC is a beta, he just doesn't know how to say "no" as in the case of the fantastic quartet investigating him. Another point that I thought was bad was the system, he is very dependent on the system, the Mc and the type that only reacts, he does not act, I mean that the MC is not proactive in many issues, whether socially or in the search for power, always and told by Mc that he seeks power to protect, but the mc does not train in matters of physics, martial arts or in the matter of using his transformation. The author gave him a martial art, but he did not show how he trained to master, you may have the knowledge of something but to work you have to get your muscles and instincts used to something that he did not do. Another point is that the system is quite useless, if the author does not want a rapid increase in power then just give the MC a power and let him train to gain strength. It was not necessary to add a useless system in which it hardly strengthens the MC.
Nice story. Cant wait to read more.Nice story. Cant wait to read more.Nice story. Cant wait to read more.Nice story. Cant wait to read more.
Good story. Cant wait to reaaad moreee Good story. Cant wait to reaaad moreee.Good story. Cant wait to reaaad moreee.Good story. Cant wait to reaaad moreee.
Truly a gem on reicarnation and a marvel world with a system it's well written and planned out. Very small bits that are left unsaid causing some confusion I'd recommend having a read to anyone with a heart for fantasy and dreams GIVE THE AUTHOR SOME LOVE
............................................................................................................................................
So far this is one of the best story that I've read. This is because of your good grammar. Some people do not know that a story with good grammar could make it more interesting as it gives us more descriptions on what is really happening and not let our imagination run wild.
I was suggested this by someone who thought that I'd like it. I thought the premise sounded interesting as fitting Legend of Dragoon into the Marvel Universe would be a task. The author has done a good job of blending the two as well as introducing us to the characters in this universe.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Do I really need to say anything else other than, amazing, thanks for the story my dudeDo I really need to say anything else other than, amazing, thanks for the story my dudeDo I really need to say anything else other than, amazing, thanks for the story my dudeDo I really need to say anything else other than, amazing, thanks for the story my dude
I've read till chapter 12 and there are a few problems that bothered me. First, the MC sometimes act impulsively and dumb. Second, usually systems are used to give a feeling of accomplishment to the readers when they see the visible improvement in the host's stats and power. The author didn't show us the MC's improvement... Third, the dialogs are weird and cringey. bye exp
Good work and very interesting self insert character and system. If we have more chapters with more frequency, it's very good.... .......,.,........, 🐵😁😁😁😁😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉 ...
i love this story man. even better you added my fav childhood game to it and made it seamless , keep up the good work and i hope to read many many more chapters from you
While I don't know if the video game powers are a reference to a certain game I haven't found. I really enjoy the story and power system you have so keep up the good work author.
mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please seriously update frequently
MC got a System and EVERY random oranization in marvel can read his energy signature whenever he uses his power... Everyone know where he fought and everything is under CONSTANT observation by any organisation. with such a background our mc would be dead or caught within a week. this part of his uselss system and power that tells everyone where he is just ruins the story. i cant read a fight when i KNOW everyone else in the world will know something is happening.... some other examples that tick me off: 1. MC meets fantastic four, they suspect him and want to inspect him and interrogate him. our mc is to beta to just say NO. like anyone would say if some random 4 people want power over your life and time.... 2. MC fights some random invaders in a bunker.... he sees the 2 commanders.... he gets in positions to snipe them.... he kills some RANDOM dude on a computer first and then some useless goons instead of the TWO BOSSES.... at least 1 headshot on the biggest threat would have spared us a useless 2 chapter fightscene..... well thats as far as i got... chapter 10.
Reveal Spoiler