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Abyssal Dark

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Author: XystOblivion

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Avnar, the heir to a flourishing empire, dealt with unbearable loneliness as well as innumerable lies and false truths from his father, the prime senator, and educators during his childhood. This, paired with his incomparable intellect and ability to understand other people, leads him to develop a better understanding of human nature as a whole. As he matures he understands more and more about the world he lives in and the people that inhabit it. The more he ages, the more his hatred and blatant disgust towards the true nature of humanity grows. Can anyone or anything save him from this abyssal dark? Or will he be consumed by his hatred and commence an apocalypse?
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This story will contain a mana system that I created myself. If I could put a trademark/copyright on it I would because I am pretty proud of it. The /No Harem Sect\ has domain over this novel. There will maybe be a little bit of romance but then again it might not last for long and may be a bit further in the novel. I hate sappy sh*t and if I were to have a love interest for the mc, she would be bada*s and only provide to the merits of the story instead of providing to the demerits.
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I am quite confident in my grammar and spelling although I may make a mistake or two here and there. Feel free to give comments of tips and pointers or any suggestions you may have. I will read them but there is no guarantee I will use your suggestion. This is my first novel and I will try to do my best.
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My main inspirations are Supreme Magus by legion20 and The Broken Empire Trilogy by Mark Lawrence. Be sure to check both of those out as they are fantastic examples of good literature that separates itself from common tropes and clichés.
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Update frequency: For right now, 2 or 3 chapters a week with 2000+ words each (right now on hiatus, sorry about that, life is kicking my ass. I do plan on returning however so stay tuned if you enjoy what you’ve read thus far. 4/9/20). I have a lot of homework and real life stuff I have to deal with on a regular basis. I have a year left of high school and I plan on going to college soon thereafter to get a graduate degree so expect some instability in the schedule for... well... a long a*s time.
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One last thing——If you don’t like the synopsis or how the mc is turning out or whatever... just leave. I know that sounds harsh but seriously, no one wants to hear your cr*p. If you have constructive criticism that’s fine but if it’s mindless bashing for no reason other than to be outraged then please leave, thank you.

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XystOblivion

Shameless 5 star review from the author. If anybody has suggestions for the story post them to this review and I will consider them. No asking for harem... just don’t

4yr
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iamnaz7

Shameless Author/reader here calling for the writer to come back. Seriously bro. CONTINUE WRITING. I can see you have the potential as well. Your writing and story making has it. What we need is more chapters. Hoping for you to keep this up. Cheers!

4yr
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XystOblivion

Just an update. I will not be posting any more of my work here as I absolutely despise this site and all that it represents. I have around 120k unreleased words stored up and I’m thinking of posting on royal road or I might just wait to publish them as a full blown book series. I will leave these precursors chapters here as a sort of bait if anyone wants to follow me on my endeavors. Just know that there is much, much more to my universe than you can ever know, unless you read my finished works that is :) I’ll leave a message on this review once I decide what I am going to do.

3yr
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Gacha123

I can see your potential man do not give in to despair. Your writing and story making has it. What we need is more chapters to realize it. Hoping for you to keep this up. Cheers!

4yr
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The_One_Below_All

This book is really good and has lots of potential. Keep up the good work your doing , I can't wait for the next chapter to come out and see the rest of this amazing story.

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RulesRegulationGu

Basically (have t read any of it only all of s..ssss... something cant think of word anyway, romance can show that within the heart there is good or at least a chance for good even the greatest tree wilts and dies through evil fire, but in its undying kindness the good fire leaves in its destruction a path for greater trees, a better world, a brighter tomorrow, both fires can be the same one or a different one based on perspective, if alone you can take it as the fire has the capacity for great evil and great good or that those fires are different and to each there own per-say anyway I have book to read hope it's good to for doing this you are an ok fire :3 (notbiased rating the 3 ratings all had 5 stars)

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