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An Alternate Story where the Blue Citadel Guild appears in the Holy Roble Kingdom's Territory instead of Re-Estize.
Trying her hand in becoming a Paladin, a choice made under the influence of her admiration for her mother, Neia Baraja has never been that good at maintaining interpersonal relationships. This was mainly because her childhood friends kept their distance from her, thanks to the fierce-looking eyes she inherited from her father.
Finding that she does not have a talent with a sword, and her ranged abilities being of little use, she instead chose to become a Squire. When a massive menacing Fortress appears in front of the wall separating their territory from the Beastman Enclave, she soon finds herself sent with the investigation team to figure out where it came from, and what or even who may inhabit it.
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This novel was a good surprise for me, even while seeing relatively little about it I like it more than the authors previous work (the blue citadel) while the background of the mc make is the fact that he made a mistake, his mistake had a repercussion that actually made his life harsher is something that I really appreciate, in many novels we have mc’s that are flawless but that just made them seem less human in my opinion. The initial location is also something that I really liked, in most overlord fanfics the mc starts in the forest of tob and usually the mc just follow the same steps Momonga followed it doesn’t matter if they are different beings with different aspirations, so I really like this change specially since this place allow for more options, he could wage war against the holy kingdom or become their new deity, there’s also the fact that he is now in the open instead of the shadows so he can’t be as passive as momonga was, overall I think this could potentially be a really good novel
It is a good story, stable, as well as a good build for the character. Is a Werewolf with wisps of darkness coming off his body while in Wolf form. Good building so far, and I'll assume the author will slowly build more on the world around them since the MC isn't keeping a low profile like Ainz did. But it's good work so far!
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Absolutely love it. The quality of the writing is fantastic, updates are frequent, the story develops consistently and is not rushed, characters are more or less consistent and is overall fantastic. 5/5 - Definitely recommended. Best work thus far.
So far this is the best out of all the Overlord FanFictions that this author has made an attempt on. Grammar is superb, events are spaced out, and a lot happens in just a few chapters. The main character seems relatable too, has shown that he has flaws and has dealt with the unforeseen consequences of storing sensitive material on an internet equipped personal 'terminal.' Sharing other character's perspectives have also greatly improved from his last works as well as their intercharacter interactions. From what I've seen this is one of the few FanFictions that has a different starting point and even has a few changes that go along with it. He doesn't immediately go around conquering the world but instead gains intelligence by simply asking in an aggressive manner, and pursues peaceful relationships with the neighboring Kingdom to avoid hostilities as he doesn't know the true scope of the New World's powers. If the author keeps using the name Jack Graham for his main character, I'm going to assume he's going to be the next 'Dylan Hunt' from Gene Roddenberry's various Science Fiction Fantasy films. While the Stability of Updates can be questioned, I can only say this... I rather see a finished and high-quality product rather than a quickly drawn, unplanned, and low-quality novel.
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This alteration to overlord is a very pleasant delight to read. This book made me laugh a good amount of times any overlord fan would be pleasantly surprised to read. can’t wait for next releases the only complaint I have is that I can’t celebrate this it doesn’t give me the option to.
To long of a wait I need more we all need more. Plus I cried when it took this long to update!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭
Could have a better schedule release time but otherwise this is the best Overlord fanfic that I've read and a lot better than some of the other novels I've read in a long time! Keep up the good work it's an amazing novel.
Author San, can you please pause this and return to the other fanfic with the angel mc, I need more, been 12 days and I'm unsure of update so please ease my heart
I see you're rewriting something again. You seem to be learning from your other books. You're covering the plot holes, actually giving your character a Build this time. It looks like you're not giving him the [Devour] skill either, this will make it a bit more challenging to get information, but entirely worth it. A chance for more content too. Are you planning on depicting actual torture? The fact that Jack is now a Werewolf is AWESOME. I love the Hispo concept you're using too, nightmarish mass of shadows and fear/agro-based aura. Vandyke beard is awesome too, Ahah. I am looking forward to his interactions with Ainz, and his emotional state going out of wack when he finds there is no going back home and he is no longer in YGGDRASIL. Currently enjoying the World Building, Stead Story Development, can't wait to meet the Guardians of Blue Citadel. I hope you explore a bit more of the New Worlds Background, maybe even add a bit more to it with your own twists.
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