/ Sci-fi / Apocalypse with a cheat sheet
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Bai Yanlong reset her life to three days before apocalypse. She would have liked to rip a new one to novel gods for giving her such a short time, but she hasn't got the time.
Not that she can do much if there was more time. After all, she's but a poor college student from a middle class family. Now if only she could catch all the super powers in the world...
What is this? she got the super powers? ... this doesn't sound right.. she has never been this lucky.. oh.. wait a minute why did that door handle vanish? she is sure it was there in middle of that door. It is only when she looked up that she realized. no good thing ever comes with out a price..
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HAHA! The story may have started a little slow and confusing. But I read just a little longer and was pleasantly surprised. The punchiness, humor, and action mixed together make this a great novel. It is honestly succeeds at swaying your emotions and reactions, which I cannot say for many novels. Keep up the stupendous writing!!!!
This is brilliant! Very down to earth and realistic! Please don't stop author! I'll vote and pay whatever I have to!! When is your next chapter?
The first thing come to mind after reading is, The Author is writing on her strong point. Though I haven't read many fantasy with female lead, I didn't find any problems reading few chapters as I felt with some. Writing style is easy to catch on. No problem there. -goodday writing.
This was really interesting to read, not only was it something that I haven't seen before (mostly because I don't read sci-fi that often) but it was a concept that was really interesting. I noticed that overtime the grammar level changed, which is really good. I'm not sure if it's the writing style, or something else but there are some clarification errors? They aren't really grammar mistakes I think? But they can make the story a little bit harder to understand. For instance: "Yanlong need not even touch it to know it." could be: "Yanlong did not need to touch it to know it." While it's understandable and I doubt too many people will have difficulty with it, it affects the flow of the story in a more smaller degree. I don't think there are a lot of grammar issues that haven't been fixed, but there are some clarification things that would make this a lot more easier to read. The story is in a way in-between first person, second person, and third person, and while the second person parts have laid off a bit, there's a sort of bend between first person and third person where the readers really get a lot of really personal details on the thoughts of the MC, which is fine, but sometimes things like "Hmmm..." can be expressed in other ways, but it's fine. it's just my opinion. Also, I would keep the measurements consistent or show some difference between the two because when describing the heights, there was a switch between cm and ft. Some people don't know the difference between ft and cm, like me and unless it's an exaggeration or something like what you did for the heights (which is why it's fine, but this is just a tiny warning). There are a lot of statements that could be expressed in a more story-like way? So, there are things like: "The Brown Amber - ..." It would be more story (like?) if it was something akin to: "The Brown Amber was..." Because, and it's not necessary, but it is a novel in a way, and so it might look better? Some people aren't as picky about it, but sometimes the format can get weird, especially considering this is a story. Maybe I haven't read enough webnovels to know that it's fine... Also, I would say to edit the first few chapters because those are the chapters were most of the smaller less consequential grammar mistakes are, like capitals and verb tense. Leaving a first impression is sometimes important for some people who thrive on them and starting off nicely would really help it. Other than that, it's a really cool concept and I really enjoyed it.
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It's quite confusing at the start but I love the progress as the story flows, I love the new concept in the storyline. I like the humor, I must say. All the best to your novel!!![img=recommend][img=recommend]
A delightful read, I must say. Filled with excellent worldbuilding and enjoyable characters. The author does a fantastic job with the writing and making sure it's on point. Kudos, and keep doing a good work.
You did a really good job on describing the characters and a fantastic job on the setting. Your writing style is also really good and it captures the nature and feel of a sci-fi setting. Great read!
Personally, I love anything and everything unique, your story has this quality and it's a great one! There are a few grammatical errors as well as punctuation errors, I'll suggest you download grammarly to assist you in this fit. It's quite easy to read and interesting, I like how you try to make the setting realistic and I also like your main character, you're doing good, so keep it up. I'll suggest that you describe the physical appearance of people and places to help us readers visualize your story so you don't only tell a story but show it, I hope this makes sense and helps.
The concept of the story is quite original. Not only is it a novel with a rare apocalypse setting, but the protagonist travels back in time with a desire to gain superpowers which she currently doesn't possess. Overall, this seems like a very interesting read, give it a try!
That's a stunning story, damn author. You did a great job, and this is the unique one too. What a story!!!! Keep your good work, keep me notified.
The plot and progress of the book is really good. These are things we all know. I want to mention the missing places for the author to improve himself. First of all, I had a hard time understanding some places where the writing language could be improved a bit. You can examine the events in a little more detail in the book. If you can correct these deficiencies in time, your book will definitely be ranked one day.
I so much love your perspective on this. It's not your regular zombie apocalypse story. I love how you planned and laid out the time travel along with the characters, though some parts of the story could use more details If youre contemplating reading this then you should
Let me start off by saying YESSSSSS! I love a good apocalypse novel and this is def def one to watch Out for. The auther spares no expense and effort when creating his characters and the world around them. it captivates you from the start and he introduces new situations at a fantastic pace to continuously keep the reader engaged. Kudos author Your novel is amazing and everyone reading this please add and read. you wont regret it!!!!!!!!!
Nice Nice I love how the story is going the whole story with all the system and others that I shouldn't say. It looks good to read for almost anybody to read
It's an apocalypse novel but definitely one worth reading. It stands out by having a character who's attitude is unique. I definitely recommend reading it!!
Lovable characters, cool super powers! Excited to see where this story goes, how the romance and friendship of the roomates progresses, how the protagonist finds a bunch of loot and leads everyone to safety!
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This novel is really good to read! If I wanna comment to it, this is just a little bit underrated. It should be popular and well-known since long ago. And might you know, it's more interesting than some apocalypse genre novels. Just don't be too disappointed about the plots like you're not too used to it, because you read other apocalypse novel and they're overpower. This novel is always suprising you so you wouldn't know that it's originally overwhelming. I have read this long ago, and I'm rereading it once again after the updates. In short, this novel left me a wonderful feeling. And FYI, I've been waiting for this to update. So author, though the update release is slow, I'm just encouraging you to make those good qualities. (≧▽≦)