/ Teen / The Day I Met Him
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Zandra doesn't know who is she gonna choose from them. She met a guy in her junior high school sophomore year.
She received a text message from someone that said "Meet me at the park".
'Why you didn't notice me when I was there in your side?' he said
'W-Why you didn't choose me? His voice broke as he began to cry.
'If you cannot answer my question then this is the last. I'm going to another country to take care of our family business.
I always love you since the first time I met you. That was the last day I saw him walking far away from me.
What will happen to Zandra?
Who is the man that she loved her first?
(HIATUS. I WILL BE BACK SOON)
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Great story. Though I am not a fan of typical love story, I would certainly stick out for more. The first chapter was really hard to read as there are many grammatical error and missing punctuation marks but as the chapter progress, there was a significant improvement with the writer's ability.
The story has a good plot, it gets interesting the more you read, it isn't too slow or fast either,just right to keep you hooked. I'll keep reading.
.................................................. the story is kinda deep to be honest. . needs some improvement in the story development a little. .. so far so good. . thank you for your hard work. . hoping for more in the future
Just started reading this novel. The writer starts off as a beginner in writing but with the advancements of her chapters, improves her writing abilities. Grammar and tenses are an issue here but reading the line, say twice, helps in understanding the point that she is trying to make. The plot is well thought of and allows the readers to understand who is what and in that sense, character development is an asset. Please don't make the entire story into conversations- depicting what the female lead is feeling and reflecting is important. Please read and improve your grammar so that it doesn't come across as a lazy attempt to write, which improves over the next few chapters. Upload an eye-candy cover so it can garner a larger reader base. All in all, it's a beginner's journey to finesse.
............................................................ This Novel is soo interesting Though it needs a little improvement. The story line is just great thank you for your hard work. Hoping for more in the future.