Naruto: The new journey

LV 13

Xumit

The beginning was somewhat enjoyable, but soon it turned into a disaster. I thought this would turn out to be a good read, but that wasn't the case. I thought Naruto (The MC of the story) would be the only special one with otherwordly parents that saved him from his life full of misery in Konoha. But, Nah, the author had to introduce another random overpowered woman to adopt Sasuke so that he can be a good rival for the MC. That was a terrible move taking the uniqueness away from the MC. Nobody wants to read a not-so-special MC. In the original story, Naruto was special because of Kyuubi inside him, and you made it worthless by removing it in this story. I didn't mind it that but giving the same privilege to Sasuke is just not to my liking. And the thing with Hinata was just too much for me. Do you expect me to believe that Hiashi would abandon her daughter just because she cared about Naruto? FFS, he's a dead guy in Hiashi's views. I don't like forced plot, and that's what you did. As a result, you completely ruined the story for me and many others. You can write whatever you want, but don't expect everyone to share the same opinions as yours. That's precisely what happened in this story.

LV 12

Venom_God

I thought naruto is going to be special, but no author decided to make Sasuke special too. I don't care if you're going to change Sasuke personality, we naruto to be special becomes he has strong parents but you did the same to Sasuke, **** Sasuke.

LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

I hope Konan, join the harem. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

Uncle_Sheogorath

I don't like it, it is NOT NARUTO!. It is wayyyyy to AU! Too many silly things! For example, aliens kidnapped Naruto from their spaceship (lol)using naruto's DNA to create a 'sister' for him the only purpose of it is probably for the author to have incest. Also, Chakra is now apparently part of even higher energy called (origin energy) WTF?!! The author could have made everything more believable, even incest if he so wishes and cut down all that other nonsense. I mean aliens kidnapped him really? Wait? Maybe this is a parody. The author should have let us know in the synopsis.

LV 1

AnimeWrite

The MC is not unique at all!!! And boring use of tragedy card on Hinata just so she can be with Naruto. Bah, and worse of all he's a modafuckin incest loving bastard. What more can you say... I quit...

LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

author, waiting for the background of the story that happened to Hinata, and you can also give her Orochimaru Sarutobi, barter xD, hopefully you can also make both "Uzumakis" enter into a relationship, they are not true brothers. ------------------------ It would be interesting to have Nanako and Hinata and maybe Konan, after they finish everything that this world has to offer, you will go to another dimension or anime world: - "·strike the blood·" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - ·Shinmai Maō no Keiyakusha· = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). - fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "·TO LOVE RU·" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). -"·Date a live·" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). -·Trinity Seven· = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). -·Infinite Stratos·= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). -·Sword Art Online·= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). -·Campione!·= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). -·Dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru ni Darou ka· = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/es/wiki/DanMachi_Wiki). -"·Sekirey·"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). -·Seirei tsukai no blade dance· = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc

LV 12

Akshay007

This is good story.... If you want something more than those repeating fanfic... Here is the thing that you are looking for .... . . . . I hope that story will become interesting as the story continued....

LV 13

Sean_Herbig

I really liked this story so different and satisfying seeing naruto not being "naruto" and the plot so different then the usual its been 1 year since an update on ur naruto story please please continue and finish writing. thank you

LV 15

Eternal_Hellhound

hope you are still continue this fanfic one of the good naruto fanfics!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 3

asaade9999

wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey wrong title this should be sasuke the new journey

LV 6

Meow_Say_The_Cats

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LV 6

Weirdo

Great fanfic you have here!!!! Definitely vote for a lot of chaos andvdarkvside been bring out to the light... Please expose all the ugliness of the village and let them all on the plain view to sow chaos... After that, just watch them blaming each others, killing each others, destroying the village balance and everyone will have it pick side and kill each others...

LV 6

66623988932

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LV 4

Mxpert_0

Its a good story although it just started it has a lot of potential as long as the author keep the updates stable and the writing quality is very good saw some errors but only like 5 in twelve chapters that very good in my book I think you should try it out

LV 4

pratiksymbol

Hey author here shamelessly giving myself five stars. I hope that you all like this story and please support me so that I can keep updating this.

LV 4

Dark_Magma

alright then story is good with good development, even if i didnt like that sasuke got power up at the beginning i still read it and enjoyed it. Everything is good if not for the fact that there aint any updates anymore which is why this story wont get a more than 4.2. also i originally wanted to give this story a 4 stare review without choosing updating stability at all but i misclicked and im lazy to rewrite all this right now and change it. so that one star stays and could be justified by author maybe having troubles as i also read his atg novel which has the super system and its quite good and was updated months ago at the latest i think. also i didnt know the atg with super system was his story. I just found this book(naruto one) on the internet and thought 'well, its interesting so why not read it on webnovel instead.' Whatever happened to author i hope he can come back cuz his stories are good and also atg stories arent that much so yeah. keep it up.

LV 3

Jotaro_Sniperkun

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review webnovel is my body exp is my blood i have created over a thousand useless reviews yet these hands will never hold anything so as i pray unlimited exp works.

LV 3

Suppa_Readah

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