Alphas Little Mate

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BunnyQueen2

I like the story build up Eve can do a little more growing said she seems to be stuck at an emotional child age due to the trauma that she received as a at a young age but I love her character can't wait to see where she is when she grows up

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marblefox59

I did get lost in the transition from chapter 1 to chapter 2. I also read up to the most recently updated chapter, and it’s an interesting read with how the characters are set up. I think this book can lead to something interesting, but needs a little tweaking. It does feel a bit rushed and grammar/spelling mistakes occur often. I am curious about what the author has in store for the MC; however, I think the story needs a little bit more development in the timeliness of events. Some steppingstones should take longer to get to because of previous events in the MC’s history.

If you're looking for an extraordinary piece......then this is the answer....is a book you'll never get tired of reading,you'll read and read and read again over and over....

Very interesting story line, just the interpretation a bit not clear with some words and selling. .but I'm able to fit in my own words to flow with the story. Good job by the way.

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Yggdrasil_

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?