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Who knows what attracts one person to another person when it comes to love. Who knows if the love you start with will be the love you end up with.
Donna was a beautiful young nurse up on her game and fast becoming a leader when she met John. John was already at the top of his game. A well known and in demand architect who owned his company and had his name attached to many of the large high-rise buildings in the area.
So how do two people of this caliber meet? Most would say the Internet, mutual friends but it was none of this. It was the old fashioned way. You know, girl goes to club with her friends sits at a table with a large group of beautiful women all drinking wine or the latest concoction on the market where no man in his right mind would go. John was no exception to that rule but he kept his eye on the beautiful redhead smiling and occasionally looking his way.
Who could help but stare at either specimen of gorgeous! The ladies at Donna’s table dared her to write her number in a napkin and slip it in his hand at the bar and then walk on by. Donna already having her second glass of wine, started feeling wine brave and sure enough did just that.
John was impressed when he read what Donna written and so after the three days wait that men always seem to do, John called Donna one restful evening after work and so started their love story...
Within the year, there was a whirlwind courtship, and marriage and life seemed to be moving in the right direction. John had his own firm and was well known and Donna was moving up the ranks at the hospital and had made Head Nurse over the surgical nurses. Both had achieved career goals. They had wanted children and weren’t trying to prevent it but with busy schedules they just didn’t have that much time to even be together to make love these days.
Time had passed pretty uneventfully for over 12 years until the John won the bid for a beautiful high-rise building in Seattle and things were not so uneventful anymore.
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The real story actually starts after chapter 10 I feel. Don't get me wrong, the start is actually great and we can share the MC's pains and the experiences that she has been through. Highly recommend and this will be a romantic great read!:)
The main character is truly inspiring, not the type of arrogant character. She is strong-willed, and it was truly fascinating to see how the author was able to describe her. She was described in a way it can make some readers relatable, in a way it can inspire people or maybe even impress people. Let's move on to the grammar in which I had not noticed any error or typos. A little thing though, there were comma misuses but! They were minimal and one proofread through the chapters will surely fix the issue. Another suggestion for the author is to add a book cover for his or her book to be attracted by many readers. I also suggest that you use lesser emojis in the novel but instead express through words. I saw a gun emoji in the middle of a chapter which looked like a revolver. Nothing wrong about that, yet again, it is a suggestion and if you are willing to use emojis, it is fine. I wish the author the very best!
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It's a nice story. The girl named Donna, our MC, is really strong and simple girl with a simple desire of living happily with the one she loved. She is not someone who does things recklessly and the way she reacted when she found her husband and best friend cheating her proves clearly. Donna had experienced a lot of things and have had matured beautifully from all those experience. Don and Joann seems like the light thatshe needs in her life. Just a little barrier that I faced in reading is the the part where characters converse with each other. Using quotation marks and specifying the name of the person who is speaking will definitely make the story more easy to read. You are doing great as a new author. Keep going ☺️...
A very suspenseful story with some foreshadowing in the beginning. The story is great and flows very smoothly. The character a very well built and emotive, making them feel very human. The writing is of high quality and descriptive. The MC is not over the top dramatic, which made me enjoy the story even more. Overall, a wonderful read! My recommendation is for the author to break down the paragraphs, as a good chunk of the readers are mobile users and reading a larger paragraph can become daunting.
The story is very intriguing. I felt suspense when she confronted the cheaters for the divorce, you could really feel how heart broken she is. Her reactions and behaviours are very human which makes the story endearing to read. A few suggestions for your writing, some areas were a bit confusing. I think its better to use quotation marks whenever a new person is talking to know when a new dialogue is starting. You could also space out your words into new paragraphs. Some readers get intimidated when looking at long areas of text without any breaks. Start a new paragraph when switching perspectives so people can tell its a different person speaking. That way its less confusing. I'd like to see more chapters and more of that hot guy at the beginning. Hope she ends up dating him. Good work author 👍
The FL of this book is portrayed well; I don’t have any issues with character design. However, there are several problems I wish to address: 1. Spacing- I’d say this is probably my biggest issue right now; the lengthy paragraphs makes it difficult to keep track of where I’m reading, and it prevents readers from being able to comment about any possible errors. My solution is to break up the paragraphs when there is a different person is talking or at least limit it to 4-5 sentences max. 2. Grammar and punctuation- I can see errors scattered here and there, but since the paragraphs are so long, it’s not easy to comment on it. 3. Also, I believe that in the chapter where Donna finds out that her husband is cheating on her with Deana...the names may be switched in some phrases, which confused me greatly. I would suggest that you revamp your beginning chapters to give the readers a clearer view at your book, and I hope you take it as constructive criticism instead of a negative review ! Keep up the hard work author, and don’t give up !
Although the story is short it's pretty good. It was carefully plotted. The character development is good. I like the story. keep it up👍👍
when I start reading this I was surprised! I love romantic stories so that synopsis get all my attention and from the first chapter I was amazing! it's so well write! the situation, descriptions, the characters and the way you narrow let me felt everything in my own... I'm reading, please don't stop! I love it!
I loved reading your book. I like reading romantic novels so your synopsis was enough to make me want to read your book. Story is well written, I didn't find any grammatical errors. Good job!
Wow, written with passion and experience. Bless you! And please keep sharing your stories :D Hoping you could also drop an initial review for my new novel. Its title is Isekai Institute. Thank you!