I Am No Hero But I Have To Be One

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MilordInk

So. Back again with a review- a more serious one. Y'all better give me some face and try the novel anyways after reading the review, since this one could become a gem. Writing Quality: 4.0 For now at least. There's only five chapters out at the time of my review, but from what I can see, the author has a lot of room to improve. But his writing as of right now, isn't unbearable, or horrible. I can easily look past his run-on sentences to see the story he's developing. He's also improving fast, and takes advice well so I know his writing style will definitely grow. (Bard, you have a 4 right now because I see a lot of potential) Stability of Updates: A compulsory 4.0 since I don't know his schedule- I'm not going to tank him if he just started writing his novel. I have feeling though, he'll be consistently putting out a few chapters every week. Story Development: 4.3, since there's definitely a story, though the future is vague. Can't say too much about the story itself(no spoilers)- so why don't you discover it yourself? Character Design: 4.0 since the MC is a bit too childish for my tastes, not really acting his age. Though, that is how the author intended him, the MC isn't too bad that I'll drop a good novel because of him. Other characters are vague at this point, so I'm still in wait-and-see mode for them. World Background: 4.0, decent enough. The author will probably expand on it later, but it's not bad either. Not much to say, so no comment. Phew. That's it. Really, that is. I'm breaking my ten chapters then review rule, but I had to do one anyways. It has a lot of room to grow, but the author has potential- and that is something that we readers should support. The birth of a good novel, isn't that what every reader wants? Try it. -Milord

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TheBardOfIves

The writer here! Like always I am trying to boost my morale on my own. I know that you may think of me as just any other shameless writer who is giving himself five stars. Well, then I am! :) I see to end the story with around twenty chapters without rushing it or spoiling th pace of the story and giving it a proper ending. So please support me by power stones and more reviews. I like to talk with others who are interested in the kind of stories I am. Anyways hope you enjoy!

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A_Rich_Brat

World looks good but the MC is a pussy. Make him more masculine. You know that little kid (his brother) did not even budge for a minute being 10 but MC was like crying

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GodOfFools

I keep encouraging new creators and that is why I am always trying to vote and review them but most of the times they give up if they do not win please continue your work even if you lose. This has a good beginning just don't leave it incomplete.

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Kenringdomstorys

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SoberanoSinNombre

SYNOPSIS PROBLEM!!!!!! the cataclysm was in 2012 and Zaiden is 17 years old, that is, he was born in 2003. but you say he was born after the cataclysm? wouldn't he be 9 or 10 years old then?

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APEX_APE

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Nature_Loving_Boy

Where is nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature nature

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Magma_Stone

A good way to read and get Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass Fast pass

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NijinskyComical

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King_Romeo

Good all you need is more ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE ROMANCE

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Hunter_Orion

I might change my review if there is more to read more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

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Lying_Foreteller

Some parrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrtttttyyyyyyy outtttttttttttt therrrrreeee. Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp

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GrumpyStick

I want some bad ass character I want some bad ass character I want some bad ass character I want some bad ass character I want some bad ass character I want some bad ass character I want some bad ass character I want some bad ass character I want some bad ass character I want some bad ass character

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PixelPaladin

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Exalted_Wise_Man

Now the MC should turn DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK DARK

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A_Reading_Nerd

I just want to cuddle Kaden!!!! I just want to cuddle Kaden!!!! I just want to cuddle Kaden!!!! I just want to cuddle Kaden!!!! I just want to cuddle Kaden!!!!