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With the combined knowledge and talents of a man from the modern world and an orphan with a mysterious past, Orison must face the challenges of a world that seems hauntingly familiar to a favorite video game yet dangerously different. Armed with determination and gifts from a questionable source, what other choice is worth making but to boldly advance when you're an orphan at the edge of the world.
*Vol 1- Post Ancient Civilization High Fantasy
*Vol 2- Magic Industrial Revolution High Fantasy
*Vol 3- 1940's Alternate Earth Urban Fantasy/Horror
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messege for the author Im realy realy realy having a hard time reading this one, the writing is good but i have never read a novel with this complicated grammar, the sentences are realy long and kind a seem long-winded or wordy and im having a hard time understanding some of what the authore ment in the chapters, this has never happened to me before and i doubt that anyone wont have the same probleme as me unless they have studied english extensively like lawyers and english teachers
Yahoo...! Dead:Lost has come to review! Humuhumu, as we expected, this story use style: "Medieval-Serious-Fantasy-Style" (No OP things, No Gods involved, etc...) Let's begin the review! Umu... Where should we start.....??? Oh! Writing Quality: Excellent! Because you use that style (from our point of view), harsh words (like f**K, bull---, etc.,) are good to be used in the story. It can make the readers "How the protag feels" and showing them "the reality". But somehow, you must reduce *a bit of that* slightly or change it with harsh but funny words (if you want to). Oh right, please don't forget to separate the long dialogue with the long sentence before them. Because sometimes you forget to write the proper punctuation, and it to prevent confusing the readers (well, few readers still haven't had good english understanding. So, it also important to use simpler sentences that explain what the protag want to do and want to achieve, but you may ignore this if your target readers are native english speakers and adults) Stability of Updates Excellent Keep the good work, the amount of readers will increase if you keep uploading the chapter, we suggest to update one long chapter every day with hanging ending. So, the readers will eager to read the next chapter. Story Development Awesome This story is good, a man from modern era "transported" into "medieval fantasy" where science doesnt exist (I mean still hasn't. if te protag doesnt develop it). The rest of explanation we had written on the [Writing Quality] (about hard to understand). We can't wait for Orinus' next action, also we are intrigued to know reptilian girl's appearance (cause we are still haven't understand, few things of her...except slave and marshlander) Character Design It's good already, you only to put "some spices" into their personaliies and backgrounds. Honestly, we would like to see Orinus (or Ortinus? or all of them are wrong?!) more .... more....hmmm, what should we say..."moving around"? No! He isnt a Romba! Ew...put some action? Sorry we can't express properly from our native language. World Background It's good! But need more specific detail, overall we would like to know the whole world (for example trades, kingdoms, armies, etc.) This review was written by 27 (Twenty-seven) on behalf of 16 (Sixteen) [well, since he like this type of story, he gladly read it until finished and he has bookmarked it] If you have a question, please ask 0 (Zero) on his discord! Dead:Lost Team on behalf of 0 and 16 27
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It is a well-written story with very good content development. I have only read the first chapter but looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work :)
This novel has Excellent writing and story development. Will continue to read and I look forward to the updates. Keep up the good work!!!!!!
Nothing much I could really critique. The writing is fluid and text is void of errors. Orison is an interesting character. The concept itself is intriguing. Dialogue as well as prose flows naturally. Quality content. Keep on writing, fellow author!
Like the curiousness of a kids, I'm reading chapters after chapters with keen intrest, full of mind and loving the characters. Just reading it once won't satisfy the emotion and love for orison rooting in me after every chapter. Worth reading.
I did expect many things but not this. As am indeed not good at expressing my thoughts well I am amazed by sheer amount fo words you are using. The story deserves even higher ratings. I am sure in future this might become even one of famous books. I rise my both thumbs up for this story, storyline and adequate writing style. You are amazing :)
Five star review so you wouldnt complain... This story have a good grammar usage, great paragraph phasing, concept, and usage of sophisticate word(Although I dislike it... Give me a vibe of JiangYe, but at least it's only on chapter one..)
I read through the chapters until third one... It was great to read the RPG elemental story since it gives me vibes to play MMORPG soon... Damn, I missed playing RPG games. Also for a bit of negative points that you need to improve, limit the usage of adverbs although just use it in a right time when you want to.
Haven't really read but decided to help because the title is interesting. Good luck writing this ;) no need to return the favour. Please give this book a try, guys. I'm sure it will be worth it.
So proud of you. Keep going. Your story is good and I know other people will love it too. When I read the part that, oh that's right. I can't say, ;)
color me a fan of this book, real good read. story was really interesting.. you have my 5 star review, good novel, more chapters... If you looking for a nice novel, no need to look further you have already found one
The idea is really unique on my opinion. The development is even nice. The synopsis intrigued me so I took a peek. That peek turned into looking and then ultimately turned into reading. If you want a novel to entertain you and to always keep you on your toes then this novel is for you. Definitely a must read.
It's an odd story, and at least one reread is needed, but definitely worth reading. The story isn't exactly in the category of "unreliable narrator", but it's close enough to make it open to conjecture as to what is real and what isn't. It would be nice if, at the end of each chapter, there was a cliff note summarizing what "exactly" happened and how that correlates to the rest of the story to that point. This would make it easier to identify mistakes in understanding before the reader has moved to far from the event.
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Its a great story loved reading it. You are a great author and it shows in your writing how much work and time you put into it. Keep writing, i enjoy reading your work
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