Dropped This Shitty Story

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Jake_Knight

Honestly I feel as of people are just blending into the crowd, I actually love this fic, I have always wanted to see a mistress death x. Mc fanfic, It seems like there is no harem so far, Lucifer is just like any regular human. Being that is sane. My only advice is to change the wishes up abit, make it so that the memories and experiences of Lucifer Morningstar doesn't mass with your personality. Thanks for the chapter and don't drop, of you like the book you continue it, just ignore the haters and learn from your critiques. people are just top picky these days, can never just enjoy a story . Thanks for the novel

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VladimierDraculTem

I don't know what to put in the description but this book is awesome and I have a lot of people who want to play with it and I have a question about the course I have to use for the course I have to use it to be a pokemon for the course I have to use to get to the course I have to use it to be a pokemon for the course I have to use to get to the course I have to use it to. . Ok ok stop that was autofill sorry needed 140 characters

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Victor_Weismann

For anyone who expects to see a Lucifer who is noble, arrogant, and astute I suggest you don't read this. The MC acts like a 10 year old child even though he has merged with Lucifer himself who is a divine entity. The Author only uses lucifer's emotions when it is convenient. The MC does not seem to have intelligence and the background of the world does not make sense. Death is a primordial entity of Marvel, she has the knowledge of all the entities that die in her universe and that death does not know what sex is .... This is stupid. Before mankind appeared on earth there were already powerful beings in the universe, such as the Asgardians, the eternal, celestials, etc. But the author ignored all of this and focused on history on earth, the history of understanding that in this universe there is only earth. Well, that's up to a few chapters later when Lucifer meets the Skrulls. My suggestion is, turn off your brain when reading this, and don't wait for any character development.

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NormalGuy

Awful main character. He is arrogant af and he wished to be op right off the bat, so dont expect anything from this in terms of character growth. Again, he has this disgusting pride and acts like a dumbass. He looks down on doing something to get stronger so the system he wished for doesn't give him quests, but it has a store function that he can get money to buy **** by basically sitting on his ass. Oh and he's in marvel 25 million years before canon just to let you know cause there isnt a synopsis. Read if your bored but go into it with low expectations and expect to be disappointed.

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The_Merchant

The MC got gang raped by drug lord and chose redundant wishes when the character he reincarnated into can do it already or better. Sigh i was expecting more from this but, sigh Well I'm only in chapter 1 so it might become better after i read the rest. I will rewrite my review if its better than i thought so

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MDHamdan

I have only two words to describe this:- Pure SH*T! 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

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asaade9999

this is pure **** and the 4 star rating is fake as you can see the 5 star reviews here is only spam, and the true review have low rating. p. s the author deletes low rating reviews because this is pure **** this is pure **** and the 4 star rating is fake as you can see the 5 star reviews here is only spam, and the true review have low rating. p. s the author deletes low rating reviews because this is pure ****

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asaade_ragnarokm

this is pure **** and the 4 star rating is fake as you can see the 5 star reviews here is only spam, and the true review have low rating. p. s the author deletes low rating reviews because this is pure **** this is pure **** and the 4 star rating is fake as you can see the 5 star reviews here is only spam, and the true review have low rating. p. s the author deletes low rating reviews because this is pure ****

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topak

its a self insert fanfic'marvel was sh i t , did not do anything just 100mil years ,he just watch because of his God complex ,he can't help cause he's a 'higher being' and don't care about it,so whats the point, same plot as the mcu with extra stuff , 2nd world is way more sh i t t i e r, so i stop Reading it,

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TruthSetsYouFree

The mc was raped in the beggining of the story by druggies. Author if you are going to add please add a warning tag on the story so that some of us wont be disgusted by your story

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SAGE

I feel that most of what happens in this story is compelled you make the character like Beta Mc in Japanese anime feel like you don't understand the MC character or you make him overlap

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HaremLoverKoneko

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Daeemon

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Daoist721221

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Tigerr_Koala

One of the best novels ive read in a long time, the story flows well and its not over the top The best part in my opinion would be the fact that while reading this novel i just cant get rid of the grin, Its Super funny without it being over the top Thanks author keep it up

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Mahnoor_Ahmed

I LoVe thisssssss 🥰 so please update! Dont add extra people to his traveling group cause its fine with just those people or maybe a few more good MCs

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yoyoman

bro I love your book can you make lucifer go to the dc world if so thank you ...............................................................

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Hunvgbsv

Hey dude update more chapters story is good marvel is okisshh but Percy Jackson park good it has potential to be great so don't stop now update more chapters brother it would be appreciated