Synopsis
Williard is an early side character who became a stepping stone for the world's protagonist, Bran.
This average gamer real-life hidden identity is a runaway young master of the Scarlet Vultures, a powerful mafia group.
One day, he gets killed by the rival gang after getting found out and woke up in the past at the time when his life changed by two events, the death of his father and the release of the world's biggest VRMMO game, War Online.
"Ugh, this skill book cost 3000 gold? I only have 500 left. Boys, go and rob the players"
"Oh! You are the young master of Paves Group? Boys, go and kidnap this trash and his father and lock them up"
"Oh! You want to challenge me 1v1? No thanks. Boys, just round him up and kill him for me"
"Did that guy used his large guild to bully you? Don't worry. Just pay us the amount in gold or real cash. We will take care of him and his so-called guild leader"
Follow Williard Ravens as he becomes the "Mafia Boss" in War Online using his Mafia brothers.
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Hello, Author here. As stated in the summary, it's the story of a guy who was sent back into the time before the game released. A few points that readers should be noted while reading. 1. MC is an average player in the past. He can't know every other event and thing that present in the game. And he isn't a genius gamer either. So, there's nothing wrong if behaves like a noob sometimes. 2. The story will not be focused simply on the game. The real world will be involved as well from time to time. 3. MC ends with only one girl. There might be two to three love interests but that's it. Not every girl who meet MC will fall in love with MC 4. The starting 26 chapters are rushed without many explanations. We can't do anything that already happened. I haven't explained about the game or his background properly. I will take it slow and explain the terms on the way. 5. MC is indeed a Villain and has an arrogant nature and very selfish. But, he is also someone with a good heart. 6. The update stability is normally 7-10 ch/week. Depends on popularity. 7. I'm not sure if I explained all the important points. If there are any other doubts, leave a comment below.
At first I thought this novel was going to be a cliche-breaker. For the first time ever I had though we - the audience - will be reading a story from the perspective of a character who is usually the mini-antagonist (2nd generation wealthy heir template) but as the story progresses the MC slowly but surely reveals himself as typical Korean hero template 101. Why even bother to integrate the mafia aspect when it plays absolutely no role at all. The synopsis hinted at greatness; the story failed to deliver.
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๐งWARNING: This novel is not for people who loves a cold and brute mafia type mc. Our mc here is witty and cool. He can also be ruthless and calculative. ๐ฅ Author's writing quality is refreshing and easy to follow. No grammatical errors here and there. The only concern is the use of punctuations. ๐ฅStory development flowed nicely. So far, @ch.70, MC is still more focused on gaming. Personally, I would want to read more wherein the MC engages in mafia related stuffs in real life, we can understand that it's still too early for that and he needs to focus more on gaming to build up his foundation in game. ๐ฅRegarding character design, well, I really love the MC's personality especially when he does things logically. He's a great MC that thinks practically rather than complicating things.(no fillers so far) Side characters are also well written. They are not overly emphasized but still, one can feel their importance and relevance to the story. ๐ฅUpdating stability? As long as the author does not drop this, I would rate it 5* because so far, I'm really enjoying the story. ๐ฅThe world background is separated in two ways in general. The world background in-game so far is ever changing because our MC is trying to boost his character's level and status for him to implement his future plans. So far, it's what you would expect from a story with a game genre. On the other hand, his real life world background is what interests me the most. Though not a lot has been given as we are still in the beginning chapters, it's something that we readers should look out for. ๐PS: idk why this novel is not at the top 100 yet. even repetitive, unreasonable logic, and grammatically incoherent novels are in top? this novel just lacks exposure. it deserves more. I've been searching for gold and I found gold indeed. Dear Mr. Author, stay safe and healthy. Also, more chapters please? ๐
In starting chapters, some players reach lvl 50in 1.5days (3 days in-game) is looking a bit extreme to imagine what would levels be after 3yr in MC life. will they reach lvl5000 or in 3yrs. I think author never played any RPG genre games although it is fantasy it is better to use low levels for narration of story. like reaching lvl 10 after 3 days in-game.
This book starts off well and continues to get better as you continue reading! Cant wait for the next chapter.............................................
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writing quality - quite good for a novel on this site. stability of updates - very frequent story development - the only thing done is mostly grinding for the most part (read up to chapter 26). the level up frequency is so fast that barely anything is explored at all. it just ends up as a 1) go here, 2) kill mob , 3) level up. repeat. if i could give this section a 0 i would give it a zero. character design -up until chapter 26 character interactions are quite minimal and short given it has been mostly grinding or orders given, thus making every character seem 1 dimensional. 2 stars total. extra star for the mafia background which is different from what you normally see. world background - suffers from same reason as story development. nothing touched upon. all we know is that mc went here got legend class, went there and trained. went there to dungeon, go there to train. no point in remembering places since mc will just speed past it soon enough. its a story wiith a good premise but pacing is obviously an issue. level ups have gone by so fast that mc is past level 100 in 26 chapters and this spans only a few days since game release. perhaps it got better in the future, i wouldn't know because i am dropping this novel here. without story development or world background in terms of quests, the game is very flat and does not engage my imagination of different scenes. given that this game should span years, the fast paced leveling is broken and i dread what kind of levels will make sense years down the timeline. If you can stomache the issues or dont mind it, feel free to continue reading. i applaud you for i couldnt bear it.
Fuck, the female character in this novel pisses me off. ๐ฉ๐คฌ๐คฌ๐คฌ๐คฌ๐คฌ๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ ๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ...............................................................
It's ok, for naw its just a copy of all novels mmorpg -> going beck in time. For naw(40chp) its 100% plot armor. Mc cash -> his dad is reach. Mc power -> he knows future. Mc status-> he is given fame because he knows future and can gain first clears on achievements (fame converts to his status as a Viscount). Mc lv -> his men will lv him up, or the guards he hired thx to "viscount" status will. For naw there Is nothing that MC did that define him or his personality. There is a lot of status screens(lv, stats, skills) so if you buy a chapters there is a risk of buying a stats sheet. I don't think author should ask for $$$ before he even let us know MC. For naw(40chp) its just world building and its a copy of all other "mc goes beck and know it all". Im droping this nowel since im unwilling to spend $ without knowing what im paying for (1-40 is not worth $).
This is a good novel. The characters aren't too annoying. The writing quality is quite good. No grammar issues. It's good way to pass some time
I cant read more in chapter 40 and i cant find it in other sites This looks good so please author fix it or maybe post it in ********** or something jut let me read it because it locked in chapter 40 and above
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I like everything about is so far. The MC isnt like the stupid MC that trys to take everything on his one le just solos alone thinking he cane challenge everyone by himself. He uses his future Knowledge nicely and isnt usimg it excessive and i wlukd say he is using kt wisely. At the moment he doesnt sem drawn to girls or have a crush that yet. Not sure how the future will be but I hope he stays single.
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Like the novel. What I like is MC isn't either a stupid or a forgiving guy. He is strong, he schemes and also has a strong background. The only thing that it lacks as of now is a strong villain to give him problems. But, only 36 chapters have passed. So, we'll have to see... A Villain who might be the final boss is already introduced in the early chapters, who is a standard guy with poor background, sick grandma, a beautiful sister, and gf with heaven-defying luck and equipment. We'll have to see when they get to meet. It's more like a rise of a Good Villain to take revenge against a hero. I can see it has a high potential, at least on the story-wise.
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