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Living life traveling the omniverse
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I don't know what happened, at one point I am here and then I am there, but hey, now that I am there I get a couple of wishes and I'll be there...Just kidding, things went by very differently, but in the end I was still satisfied, because I still got what I want.
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A/N: I am posting on fan fiction.net as well, my name is goken son of summer
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So the MC has instant mastery and Saiyan powers along with the Rinnegan. Later on the author just starts adding knowledge the MC didn't have before where he can build anything he thinks about. He awakens in the Jurassic era and let all the dinosaurs get killed off by the meteor. Time doesn't seem to affect him at all and is glossed over by multiple time skips. Right after the mass extinction, the MC gets Super Saiyan God form and meets his first harem member. And it is Death from the Marvel Universe. This is where I learned it was a crack fic. There was no logical reason for a romantic interest here who is 'brainwashed' to love him and completely destroyed any hopes I had for the story. But at the least this fic is better than Zenith and actually follows some form of pacing/story structure.
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No Ntr this story will not be any ntr, if you see anything you think is ntr please let me know, and I will change it.No Ntr this story will not be any ntr, if you see anything you think is ntr please let me know, and I will change it.
One of the reasons why i give this such an low score is because "insert your imagination", like really ?? if i wanted to do that i would write my own story.. there are some more mistakes, otherwise its ok
Thanks for the chapters and great work and keep up and don't drop and keep writing more and more chapters. Hope you post more chapters and don't drop. Waiting for adventures in other worlds in future.
In this world the emboidemnts rule the omniverse The emobodiment of death is a she, unsuprising, she is in obssesd with mc and comes to earth to Claim him Mc won't give himself up without a fight, Just wanted to clear that up thanks for reading
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Bruh, this dude obsessed with Jaune or something, powers suck, grammar sucks, dropped Now for that extra so Webnovel will actually let me post this. Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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I like almost everything thing,the MC is interesting and I like how OP he is. I like how smart the MC is. The only thing I donโt like is the harem but thatโs just because I feel like harems are really annoying but this harem probably wonโt be to bad. All and all not to bad.
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The idea of the starting a multiverse adventure is somewhat unoriginal. God appears, and he gives you an adventure with no reason. Typical starting sentences of an adventure through the multiverse which I don't mind. Typical, but unoriginal. The writing qualities seem like a person who's at least tried to write the fanfic. Although you ARE a rookie author, I don't blame you. But at least put some more effort if you want to write a decent fanfic. I'd give you a four star for that. The character designs are showing signs of effort, I'd like you to do the same as everything else. That's my suggestions of writing a good or decent fanfic.
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This story even though has some flaws, it is incredibly fun to read, the grammar gets so much better as the story goes on, and most importantly, Death is in this story, the living emboidement, and it is a she, and she is madly in love with mc. Yandere death, is a new one. I am heavly looking forward to more