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A normal person, with a normal life, being normal. He always felt that he was born in the wrong world. What if he had the chance to live his life in the right world? What if he had a Saiyan bloodline?
I am interWorld and I will send you to the hereafter.
I'm new at this, I've never written anything. I am in the pure boredom of quarantine, English is not my first language, has no harem, I accept constructive criticism and I have nothing naruto, all from its respective owner.
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English is not my language, I use some applications to correct some errors, but it does not correct everything, Some sentences can be changed in the middle of the sentence . ... Creative ideas, mission, OC, some directions in history, constructive criticism are always welcome. Thank you.
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it was good but did you drop it atleast add one chapter where you answer questions like "Did you drop it?" " Is it on haitus?" "will their be more updates?" "should I remove it from my Library?" "should I expect something more or did you move onto another novel and would finish that first?" etc etc...
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An amazing story love it write more. I will be waiting for the next chapter always. Great work Dude. PS Write more Naruto Fanfics. (Can't think of more so just filling the word limit)
Omg i am realy sad for you and your novel author Why ? Cose you put this awesome novel in WRONG category like srsly When people look for naruto they got for fanfic IF you put your novel there 100 % takes 1-3 place at top !!! I realy had HARD time finding this gold novel But boy i am GLAD i DID TY
I'm from Argentina friend, I read your novel, after reading several novels I think your novel is one of the best, the character is well done, the story makes sense, I like the power of the character, since he is not so absurdly powerful, I rarely comment because I'm lazy, but I wish you would continue the story
so far a great build up, love the storys pace and how things are going, can't wait to see how things advance in the future! but I do really hate danzo!
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Inglesh not best, but i likeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I'm already tired of these fanfic filled with harem. With their systems that leave the MC op in 20 chapters. So I liked it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
first review and yeah I read three chapters grammers not the best but I still enjoyed it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
While still readable, I've read mtls with better grammar, I liked the interactions with Mc and Kakashi, but the sakumo interactions are bad, the love interest is an oc which I'm cool with but the Mc simps way to hard right off the bat, plus mcs like mentally mid 20's at least and she's like 10 bro that's just gross I get kohona has some were standards when it comes to the academy and people falling in love, but its different for them because there both the same age physically and mentally, him declaring his love at first sight comes off with some serious pedomaru vibes and kinda killed the story for me
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