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Since ancient times, mankind has always found creatures and phenomena that instill fear in them. These creatures were given names to define them more precisely. They were called Monsters, Beasts, Nightmares, and so on. Even the word Fear is also a kind of name for this frightening phenomenon. But some creatures don't have a name. They shouldn't be called or mentioned. Terrible, insane, brutal, and horrible. Nameless.
Before reading this fanfic, I, as the author, must warn you.
1. Reading this fanfic can cause uncontrollable anger, undermine morals and religious beliefs, and shake faith in humanity. The author disclaims any responsibility for possible, after reading this work, contact with otherworldly forces and the breakthrough of the abyssal temptations led by Satan into reality.
2. English is not my first language and I don't know it perfectly. If you see mistakes somewhere, please point them out. I'd appreciate it.
If you're still interested, then welcome.
First world: High School D&D
It's a good world to start. But I powered it up a bit, added a few types of new magic, and some important details.
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Review at chapter 14 It's good and I recommend it. Now for the writing quality. It's improving. But the repetitive use of A instead of The is what annoy me. You say "A guy is..." And talking about the same guy you still say "A guy ...". This was done a thousand times. Most of the chapters start like bad jokes. Eg: A tall guy and a short guy are in room with a coffin; A tall guy, a short man and a woman are in a carriage with a coffin; A man, a woman and a kid are drinking tea;... Now the characters are still a little shallow but I give you the benefit of the doubt. At my understanding, you made the supernatural world involved with human politics. At least the mage are involved. Now I hope you understand that their implication will change the war outcome. It's not a battle of numbers and technologies anymore. The side with the strongest mage win. They won't be deterred by a simple missile which may not be as powerful as their strongest spell. The normal humans and weak mages will just be canon fodder. I hope you will take that in account. Also you made the mage (together) stronger than they should have been but don't forget that they are the weakest spectrum of the supernatural world. You will have to boost the others too or just make it an AU. My best regards.
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To be honest, this might be my favourite fanfic (novel?) from webnovel. Writing quality is amazing, of course, some grammatical errors here and there. But, nothing too major. Would love to see more chapters though. Hope you would update soon. :)
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