/ Urban / His War-Freak Wife
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A wealthy stubborn woman was forced in an arranged marriage to a successful businessman.
Her family, on the brink of bankruptcy, sought out ways to avoid destruction. And in the midst of their downfall, a businessman offered assistance in exchange for their only daughter and with their helpless state, all they could do was accept.
But what if in the mixture of a marriage full of twists, an unexpected romance comes into bloom?
This is a story of a strong-willed stubborn woman struggling to attain her freedom again and a mysterious man with a hidden past.
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Beatrice Chastain was a spoiled brat known for her bad reputation and horrible personality. She had the freedom to do everything she wanted, so it was a huge detriment for her when her parents informed her she'll be getting married to Lucas Lancaster.
All she knew about Lucas was that he suddenly popped up into the business industry and skyrocketed to the top. Although he was an elite businessman, he was also mysterious and disliked publicity so no one ever knew what type of man Lucas was.
They were married but Beatrice is known as 'The Mad Woman' and she would live up to that name. She would never submit and she'll make sure divorce would be their last destination.
But in the middle of it all, her heart began to waver and soon she fell for the cold yet warm-hearted man.
Will she pursue her plan of attaining her freedom once again or submit to the chains of marriage?
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You said English was your second language but you were really good! There were minimal errors here. Mainly it was only the punctuations. Nevertheless, you wrote well in your second language. You were able to describe the feelings, emotions, and how the characters looked like. One comment about the writing quality (I also already commented this on Chapter 6), about the POVs. I hope you will be able to edit it. The plot progressed quickly and as a reader I was able to emphatize with Beatrice. And even though I have only read a few chapters I have the want to know how their relationship would evolve from love to hate. Overall, this was a nice and easy book to read. Good luck! 😊
Web novel has very few stories to relate to,but this story has so many amazing things in, it it's relatable! -dialogue is amazing -constantly wanted to know what happened next, the writing was great, and the plot moved along well. I will be checking out this author’s works for sure.
The story is easily comprehendible and the quality of writing is better than what you come to expect from webnovel. I weirdly enjoy the interactions between the characters much more than I expected. I can't wait for more chapters from the author and I hope the audience continues to grow so more people can be exposed to the novel.
I can easily relate beatrice being forced into an arranged marriage.. I am just surprised to read this kind of thing happening in Western world.. In our culture this is a common practice on a daily basis.. I like your way of thinking and explanation dear author.. Keep up the good work and give us more udpates
The characters are well described. Your writing quality is good. I loved the Female lead so much. She's very likable. The plot is very common. I have read many novels like this. But I'm confident that your book is interesting on its own. Good job. Keep writing!
Beatrice Chastain and Lucas Lancaster. I loved the chemistry between them. I am loving this story so far and there are zero to few grammar errors but they are not interfering with the story plot at all. The pace is wonderful and the character description is perfect. Totally recommended. Please update the next chapters soon...
The story line and plot is very interesting as well as very thrilling. I am hoping for a little bit more polish. But overall this book is good🥰🥰
Okay so very interesting plot line. For a novel based on a what I'm assuming to be western setting, this has a unique plot. But like based on the fact that where I'm from arrange marriages are a very common practice, this is like the things you hear everyday if you sit next to a bunch of gossipers. In terms of being forced into a marriage by your parents, it's not that unusual for me to read but the fact that this is based off of a western setting makes it different from the shows I've seen and things I've heard. Because of the cultural difference, difference in religion and just generally different practices. It's very interesting. Although it's a forced arrange marriage in this case, there aren't any novels that I've come across which have arrange marriage in a western background. The writing is good, author tries to make it interesting instead of just repeating the same things over and over again which is something I appreciate.
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I loved the first chapter, I will edit the review and add stuff, while I finish the other one's. But I love the active and athletic tone of series, we easily know what type of girl she is- without even going to a depth of her character. The plotline is simple and good. I would love to see what different troupe you used.
I only read the first chapter and rushed to do review. Because I just surprised in the end she is taking about marriage I thought something sad is happened. Your writing skill was nice. Keep doing. I give 5 rate to show you my support. Good luck.
I love strong characters and the book is a good example. I am looking forward to the book and also looking forward to your own reveiwn on mine. Romance is truly nice.
Props to the author for the amazing writing qualities. The story flows very naturally, and the plot is pretty interesting. Now we have a FL who isn't meek, and that I love. I'm very sorry for the late review, haven't really got a lot of time to read these days. I hope you don't mind. Anyway, great job and keep going, author!
A great story. Probably a unique one. I have read many stories related to Arranged Marriage where the FL was forced to marry some Random guy who was of course the ML where he was in love with her and slowly then she also started to fall for him. But this story was really amazing and a bit different from the ones I read before. Just a little bit suggestion (My personal opinion)- I felt that in some parts the tenses were mixed. But altogether the story is amazing. Keeo up with the great work author.
Unwanted Marriage, a book written by Immortal_eve4 captures the life of a rebellious daughter who goes by the name, Beatrice. She struggles to survive the unexpected decisions of her parents, such as a marriage she never wanted, hence the name of the novel. The author has done a great job of merging both Romance and Comedy together to keep the readers entertained as they read further. The book discusses the advantages and disadvantages of being a patriarch such as their common traditions and cultures of arranged marriages for the sake of the wealth and fortune of the company. The book is told in two perspectives to further understand the emotions of the character being portrayed. It has all the elements of a good Romance type of novel with a mixture of the author's own twists. For the sake of avoiding bankruptcy, Beatrice's family sought to find a man who would change all of that. His name is Lucas Landcaster, a man in which Beatrice is forced to marry. Though she agreed by force, Beatrice has a plan of her own, to ruin the life of the man she married until he decides to have a divorce with her. The author has a solid understanding when it comes to grammar. The basic principles are well understood as such as the verb agreement. However, the punctuation is the flaw of the author's writing quality. Most dialogues lack a period or an exclamation mark, depending on the dialogue itself. Emotions are conveyed properly and the slight presence of vulgarity emphasizes Beatrice's feelings. The author also has a wide vocabulary range as I haven't notice any repetitive words. During the first chapter, Beatrice's stubborn nature is introduced. Although the nature was quite clear, I wasn't able to see how she really looked like. Though the scenarios are vivid, the descriptions of the characters are quite lacking aside from the basic pupil color and complexion sort of description. Some events also seem unrealistic or maybe done for the purpose of comedy. An example of this is a worried mother who reveals to the daughter she's getting married in a middle of a car chase. It seems like something that doesn't happen usually, for me at least. Overall, it a book that deserves four stars. I enjoyed reading, it tickled my funny bone. If there are any suggestions, then that would be to fix the punctuation. Also, for emphasis, using an em dash will help. When it comes to characters, add more style and description as so as the mansion aside from using plain adjectives. -Dann Giovanni
Now, this is a realistic romance novel. Some romance genre novels are not that relatable or sometimes not that good at all. This book could take the attention of both boys and girls. Keep up the good work!
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