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Sovereign of Paradise

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Author: Elude

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Sovereign of Paradise. (Undergoing Rewrite)

The oasis of death that Tylem yearned for had at long last come, or so he thought.

Failing to defeat the unique heart cancer, Tylem, an eighteen-year-old youth who went through his entire life without anyone, ends up reincarnating.

Little did Tylem know… that at the final moments, his still-beating heart had clawed out from within, spitting out a mysterious ball of light that would change his tragic life forever.

Viewed as a genius, follow Tylem as he traverses his childhood once more, seeing the bleak world remain all the same.

The evil mother, who disdains him, willingly departs to visit King Yama with a smile.

In front of the hanging rope, Tylem’s clear eyes resembled a calm lake, the familiar landscape mocking his empty heart.

This time around, Tylem will coldly walk through the ordeal of life without the stinging tears that once clouded his judgment.

From a tragic youth, he shall climb up and finally find his place in the world, evolving along the way.

Come read the long, emotional tale about how a cultivator conquers the impossible Tutorial, see through Tylem’s eyes of how he, a heartbroken son, orchestrates a grand plan to descend the twelve chaos rings into great mayhem.

Join Tylem on a story about how relationships can come and go, learning the ways of the world.

Goal: I will start uploading two chapters a day once we hit one-thousand powerstones in a single week. Thank you all for the support!

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Warning from Author:

This novel is not for everyone, even more so the faint of heart. It takes on a darker, sinister outlook at times. 'With Cultivation, I Will Defeat the Tutorial' is a thought-provoking tale about a youth still trying to find his place in a world that doesn't need him. If you're looking for a predictable, unchanging MC who has a very clear motive from the beginning, this is not the place. Furthermore, as much as I wish that I could manage to write a perfect story, I, alas, cannot. I’m just one measly human, and plot holes will very likely exist—along with cliches. I might also forget things and repeat information at times because of it. Apologies in advance.

Regarding the stability of updates, I have work, but I’ll try my best to ensure consistency.

Like most people, the characters in the story don't make perfect decisions, but it will fit their character and age—followed with reason and justification. The first arc can be considered a very long prologue focused on the explanation and development of Tylem and his mindset before the main plotline takes place.
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    Caliburns

    I'm glad to see that the author is back! I highly recommend that everyone gives this novel a chance before deciding whether or not to read it. From what I have seen, the author has excellent grammar and vocabulary. It's always refreshing to read his work compared to some other top novels with subpar grammar. At the moment, the novel has just started but i'm sure it wont dissapoint. Im looking forward to this journey! ^_^

    3yr
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    Crimson_Assassin

    So even though this book only has 21 chapters, it’s extremely promising so far. Writing Quality: 5/5, so far I don’t believe I have spotted a single grammatical error, and if there are those that I missed then they are basically negligible, and the story flows really well Stability of Updating: 5/5, I’m not exactly sure since I binged this novel in one go, but it says 8 chapters a week and that’s above average Story Development: 5/5, I really like the premise of this book, and I think that it’s playing out really well in the book, though at this time there are still many mysteries Character Design: 4/5, I love the MC and all of the characters that have been introduced so far however there are 2 problems that I had, first of all, we haven’t seen any real “villains” but there was a typical one dimensional young master who tried to attack the MC for seemingly no reason, and secondly, the MC was an abused child, but opened up to his family extremely quickly, within 1 week. World Background: 5/5, we haven’t really gotten much world background at this point, though it is understandable since there are currently so few chapters I decided to bump my review up to 5 stars simply because the author is extremely responsive, for me currently it’s like 1 am yet the author still responded to my comments pretty quickly, which I consider more important than a few character flaws. TLDR: very good book with a lot of potential, highly recommend

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    Elude
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    This is the tale about a reincarnated youth called Tylem, a young man trying to find his motive to live in a world full of pain and heartache. The novel has a dark outlook, and like some other teenagers, he does not have any real goals or dreams at the beginning. I hope that some of the readers will be able to find a piece of themselves in Tylem and relate to him, myself included. Like most people in the world, sometimes... life just doesn’t turn out how we want it to: no matter how hard we try. Even with the best intentions, we can still do the worst in their eyes. Regardless, please enjoy this heartfelt tale of mine about Tylem’s journey, and let’s experience a better future together.

    3yr
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    DaoOfPeeking

    Rasengan!!!!!!!!😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

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    Jlairu
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    I usually against giving five stars, but anything else couldn't do this story justice. Can't critique anything in particular, maybe I just love the story. Honestly though l want to invent time travel just to find the next chapter. Author Please dont stop with the quality chapters!

    3yr
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    TabooExistence

    Good story so far really like it plz more 😀😀😀😀😀😀🙃😃😃😃😃😃😃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑

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    Shenoran

    Great story so far, not bad, not bad. I've never seen this kind of beginning and character before so I would like to say this is unique, (I've just about read every good story on novelupdates, welll to an extent.) From the amount of chapters that have been released, it has beseeched my interest and I'm looking forward to reading the rest. Can't make an in-depth review due to the number of chapters, however, so far it is very good :). The title makes me think that something cool is comin.

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    LNR_1001

    This a really dope story you gotta give it a read. If not for the awesome world building, and character development but for the interesting story line that is just getting better. If the author keep this up the story is gonna blow up soon.

    3yr
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    Apostle_of_cthulhu

    A pretty good book the writing is good I dont realy see anything but I barely passed English so yeah don't trust me on that but I can tell you the book is an enjoyable read a little forced with dialog at times but its fine. Has some nice face slapping and fighting. Mc isnt a p#ssy or scared to fight wich is realy nice and I love those mcs. Hmmm the world building is nice kinda akward at times like sometimes they just bring up random things in the past. Oh author i recommend putting little things like *5 days latet* when time passes between chapters cause its hard to tell in some chapters of time passed or not. But overall a realy good read for a couple of chapter and will probably watch out for new chapters sadly I have no money to gift powerstones and such.

    3yr
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    Cooper_Davis_0966

    keep up the good work

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    DraconicWulf

    nice story .. .

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    Devast

    It is extremely rare for me to evaluate a work or comment on a chapter, but this novel is incredible, I read all the chapters available at the moment in just one day, hell, this became my favorite novel, so please keep up the good work.

    3yr
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    FeaR_Less

    I have 4 ac . I will give u all ** . Plz release moreeee . I want moreeee . TY for hardwork .

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    deanbunter88

    Thanks for the novel😊😀😄😅😉😆😯😇😯😇😆😆😂😂😁😁😀😀😊😀😄😅😉😐😯😯😑😐😑😆😇😆😇😂😆😂😀😁😀😀😊😅😄😯😉😐😯😑😐😆😇😂😆😂😁😁😅😊😀😁

    3yr
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    Garo_
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    Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating. Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating. Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating. Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating.

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    deanbunter88

    Thanks for the novel 😀😊😀😄😄😅😉😆😯😯😇😆😂😆😂😁😂😀😁😀😀😊😀😄😅😉😆😯😆😯😇😆😇😆😁😂😂😀😁😀😁😅😉😆😅😉😅😄😀😊😁😀😂😀😆😂😆😯😆😆😉

    3yr
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    Dae196
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    I hardly give out reviews but I have to say one of the best books I ever read the five star rating is definitely deserved Author you can do no wrong at this point you have a new great fan.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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    SongTian

    Loving this book! The MC is a bit cold and I like that + he has his reasons. Sometimes: there are cliches but that’s unavoidable with so many novels on the site. The character/world development is fantastic, more please.

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