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Why didn't you bother to save me?
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It’s short but each line grips at you, and omg that last line ‘why didn’t you bother to save me?’ Literally tugged at my heart 😭 our poor baby. I wanna see him be a villian, so please please continue 😊 it’s been a while so probably dropped but I really wanna read more xx
please right more it has so much potential to be amasing.h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h hh h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h hh h h h h hh h hh h h h h hh h h h h hh j jj jj jj j j j j j j j j j j j j jjj j jj j jj j j j j j j jj j j j j j jj j j j j j j jd d d dd d d dd d d dd d d dd d d
This is really good. I like the plot so far, and your writing style is enjoyable. It would be nice if the following chapters are a little longer than this one, but overall this is good so far.
okay so I noticed that there are 0 reviews on this so I decided I mine as well put a review for this because even though there is one really short I guess you can call it chapter or prologue and I'm already pulled in and I want to know what happens next like I'm just excited to know because it's right off the bat it goes into the story is already so interesting.