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A Space Explorer, Anami Nina. Carrying out her duties as one of the Master Legends from Planet Herby to find the Creator's existence and The Godmote, a God's heirloom. Expose the rottenness of the ESDA and the Cosmos Government that deceived the Universe. Will Nina succeed? The story begins with the rescue of their comrades who seem to have been caught on Planet Guldish. Which is controlled by the ESDA Organization...
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The best part of this work is the novelty behind its hybrid concept which incorporates the use of both magic and technology within its world. That's definitely an interesting new idea worthy of being praised in and of itself. However, the thing that hinders this from getting more attention is probably the writing. Let me comment on the ff points: Writing - needs improvement. In the early chapters that I've read, I pointed out quite a few errors and suggestions on how to possibly remedy them. I noticed about the overuse of character names in every chapter (every paragraph, esp). Please proofread and edit. Utilize some pronouns (he, she, his, her, etc.) to make the read more pleasant. Also, make the dialogues more interactive by adding emotions to the characters' thoughts and actions. Instead of saying "___ said", try being creative by putting it this way "___ knitted his eyebrows in confusion after hearing those words from her" or something. I think its more fun that way. Stability - keep it up Characters - they were well-described, tho I prefer a slow-burn *romance??* between the two leads, because hehe.... Maybe that's just meh. Development and World - vis-a-vis my comment on the writing. The imagination behind the world is really commendable, and I'm sure it can be improved with more practice. Cheers ๐ฅ
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Looking at the synopsis, there is this sway to this story. I could see a fantastical work owed to the power and iota of gothicism. This of course will turn out well. The writer has created such an amazing concept. Watching out for the twist.
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wow nice one author san... your ideas are fresh, nice plots and good characters I really like it...keep up the good work. May your ideas never run out.
Hey.. ooops sorrry I didn't know how to review before. Well I already told it's something new what I read normally. so yes it's really good with good content and story line.keep up with your good work ๐
I like your story. The theme is completely new for me but I liked your idea. I like your way of introducing the characters. way to go writer. Keep on uploading more. All the best.
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ย I give this book one hundred stars! There is a "to be continued" at the end so you have to read the next chapter see what's in. I can't wait to find out what happens!!! Keep it up! Goodluck!!! ๐๐๐
I am very happy if you are interested and like reading this story. I am sure that in writing this story there are still many shortcomings, your criticism and comments are very meaningful to the Author. Thank you very much.