Pokemon: Dream or Reality

Sorry but you Rushed the story too much, on the side of the plot little to nothing, rushed the development it strange to have max level Pokémon when he isn t even at the 3rd gym and practically more than half of is Pokémon are robbed and they never make a problem they like it? Strange{ I like the robbing bit there should be moderation in many works it s a interesting point but you used it not in the best way}... Some ideas are not bad like I said it s rushed... there is the start of the story where he should train develop and raise the pokemon but bam in like 7 chap he is master trainer already with no badge fully evolved Pokémon even semi legend that should get maxed with more difficulty and have starter Pokémon more powerful than mega evolved one

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