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A collection of short stories, poems, poetry and musings written by a wandering lonely author.
The heart is a receptacle of undiscovered wonders. A place so mysterious yet chaotic at the same time. Let's unravel the secrets of the cosmos, the riddles of the universe, the questions of the soul.
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You necessitate working on writing longer sentences. Separate universal decisions so people can earn interest and read comfortably. We're all lifeless inside, and we're all different varieties of lazy inside us.
Really aesthetic to read and just you know, drown in those words. I love how u illuminated the little moments but sometimes the sentences are a bit too complicated for an online reader, would definitely take it if it was a pretty vintage paperback.
I love your characters! The way you describe your characters make a reader relate to them in a deeper level, like Puso. Puso is someone we all know, we all see, and we're all aware of their existence. Putting your story in my library, eagerly waiting for your updates!
First of all, that's an uncomfortably large vocabulary usage. I had to search some meanings on Google (my English is not that good). I enjoyed your short chapters because it is easy to read through without thinking wayyyy too much as the sentence itself already makes sense just as simple. I mean, we are all a little lazy and short chapters are just easy to navigate.🤷🏻♀️ Don't let anyone say otherwise. I do agree that you could lengthen the chapter or describe the character's profile, but that's about it. I was pretty interested in the way you write, especially to build my vocabulary.😉
You need to work on writing more sentences. Seperate wider sentences so people can gain interest and read easily. We're all lazy inside, and we're all different kinds of lazy inside us.