/ Horror / Father?
Synopsis
"Will you save my father?"
Owen is a fifteen year old boy with only his father which are settling in Las Vegas for now. Half of their family was burned in a wildfire and is lost in their family and themselves.
Doxin and Jacques are very experienced detectives who are not much in communicative with each other. But then, one event changes their whole lives and actions.
Exprience the excitement and thrill in the story, the bonds and the nerve-grasping words, and the adventure and danger in the story.
Foreword by theSuccessor:
Father was a very hard story to think about. I even still think to this day, but I'm more than glad to make this book. Please share, review, powerstone vote, and (not possible) you can even make a show out of it(although I don't plan you to do that). But, God bless and have a good day
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The 1st chapter is amazing. There are some creepy scenes which makes it better. But I think that the ending could have been more better than it is now. I like this book and I am waiting for more updates.
I love how detailed your characters were like when you introduced Jacques as the clueless, forgetful character by including the fact that he didn't know how to work the coffee machine and how he forgot to tell Doxin about the robberies. The plot isn't a cliche horror story. Kudos to the author, keep up the great work!.
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That power off scene was great. And half of there family died in the fire that's tragic! I like how you are going with the story if you keep doing you than you will get to the top one day!!
The story and plot are really great and the character development is admirable too. I am now attracted to this book and hope the author good luck! 👍
I really like this book,it has a great plot but I feel like the author should have included chapter 1 in the sypnosis instead of posting it as an own chapter.Other than that Good job author!
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A lovely way of phrasing and use of language. I find this a thrilling read. We get to really imagine the scene as the story unfolds. The author is very invested in description so there isn't much to nitpick about in terms of description as the whole point of thriller and horror is to be able to imagine the scene that is going on in the story.
I love the way the author portrayed is thought, using POV style of writing. Nice storyline, plot and development. The suspense was spectacular. Nice link up with each chapters. Best thriller-horror novel I've read so far. Thumbs up to the author.
I normally do not read horror cause it kind of scares me but I actually enjoyed reading your book, Yeah some parts were really creepy but an okay creepy the type I can handle and in a way it sort of intrigues me. Good job author
I would say it was quite exciting for me to read this story. There were no errors and to be honest I would be reading this fully even though I only read the first chapter. I really had the urge to read this book. This book had a great story line and the plotting was good. i would say please improvise the character development cause I really wanted to know the ML. It was overall great and I will continue to read the book after giving this review.
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Im a fan of horror movies and I must say the first chapter of this book is quite creepy😊..I' can't wait to see how it all goes. Thank you so much Author successor 😊😊
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I like the horror ones and this product is a good candidate for it. I liked the illustrations and story flow. congratulations to the writer.
I liked the characters, they feel human not like robots in the majority of novels, the thrill is on point when I started reading it captivated me
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OH MY GOD !!! this is soooo great. It every thrilling and compelling. The way the plot is developing is nice and even the way the synopsis is written itself makes the reader want to go through the chapter carefully. Do update regularly, you're so natural.
Interesting story so far! I'm about 10 chapters in and it's quite a ride. The horror aspect really shines in creepy spine shivering scenes, and the plots and characters are interesting thus far! Can't wait to see where it goes from here!
Wahooo..it is horror & thriller. My favorite one. Obviously I liked it. I'll surely surely recommend to read this novel for sure. Keep it up dear author. I loved it. Keep writing and updating.
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