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Topaz, a lion faunus born in strange circumstances, must go through the world of Remnant along with the beloved cast of RWBY to save the world. What will his journey look like, and where will it take him?
This is my first attempt at writing down the ideas that fill my head, so it's quality may not be the best, especially towards the beginning.
I do not own anything related to RWBY or the cover image.
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Plot is too forced If u can tolerate it then, rest is good enough. ##########################################################################################
She gives the same high five because she is great. Do not pay attention to what others say, do everything your way because you do it well. Sorry english word i use google translator
I recommend this book for anyone that's want to find a good story, this one is a must to read book, give it a try, i guarantee this one is a great story.
i like the book ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
love the book, the story development and the main character!! This book has tons of potential and I hope the author doesn't drop it like most do, the author writes well and has only a few grammar mistakes and plot holes (that I could notice atleast after all I'm not all knowing) Thanks for the great book so far author san
I read the entire book. Its extremely well written with very few plotholes. I gave 3 stars for character design but that was mainly because of my own dislike of some of the MC decisions. I understand why the author wrote him that way but still I hate the over goody 2 shoes. Why would he let his enemies live? He had every right to kill them at least in my opinion
I swear ive seen this authors name somewhere before but its a good book. its weired cause it shouldve been in my library. Im fairly maybe it got removed by webnovel i somtimes lose books from my library my own got removed once.
I'm a new fan to this fan fiction and I love the story. If you can get past the first few chapters then it is a lot better (the first few chapters are also good).
I'm gonna be honest the MC is meh, not good, not bad just average i guess *shrugs*, the story at the start is all over the place and too fast paced, the story doesn't suck me in theres no hype, no excitement things just happens I barely care about the MC or his family the OC's are ok i guess? overall noting stands out its very average a bit boring
(Ch30) Iโm just dropping this here cus the story just keeps getting worse and worse. Every time I think it stops it just keeps digging itself a bigger hole. The action is average at best and isnโt really the man focus of the story. The story isnโt bad but just boring and is really the main reason Iโm dropping. If Iโm skipping chapter after chapter just to speed run the boring af dialogue then ur probably doing something wrong. And the romance is by far the worst part about this. from like chapter 1-15 or something the romance was pretty stiff and just overall not great but there wasnโt harem and it was tolerable. But then the author just adds neo to the harem and after that it just goes downhill. How they meet is forced, how they interact is forced, how his girlfriend just kinda excepts this is also really forced. Everyone in the story is just kinda ok with this now and there little backlash. Itโs extremely unnatural. I know the author is never going to read this cuz the story finished like 2y ago but I wanted to be a silly little guy.
first of all the plot is very forced. Second, the character is very beta since he is a lion! who are very proud Third, at first it had a decent romance until then it became completely meaningless.
The story is okay..... to me atleast. Personally I think they the beginning of the story was great and then it slowly went downhill but i havent read it in a while so i do not know.
First things first, the story is quite bad, everything about the story is so forced that it hurts to read, and now you may be wondering, hows the character relationships, developments, and romance? Yeah no, author doesn't understand relationships, they are always worrying and b****ing and being total bimbos, the mc included, it's like the author always wants sympathy every chapter at every moment cause it keeps going back to schnee incident, and then the neo incident, and then the beacon incident, etc. Now on to the neo arc, here are the words that describe it perfectly, what the f***? No seriously, cause neo is weak and going to get dirty touched in an alleyway by low thugs, seriously I mean like come on neo is powerful. Dont get me started about how forced neos relationship is and the meeting between mc, in fact everything about the mc and neo in said arc, doesn't make any sense, it was annoying painful confusing and cringing to read it, the author does not know how relationships work at all and it feels like a 10 yr old fantasy in a diary. And then there is the other love interest, same problems with neo being bimbos acting weak and being annoying, just without a main plotline and only a minor story. Let's focus on the mc a bit, as expected the interactions with people the character development all sucks, same with all the characters but nevertheless the mc doesn't get it any different. Mc doesn't use his brain, his backstory could be better, and most of all for action and story purposes, he doesn't use his semblance which is morphing into creatures and partial body modification, if the author focused his fighting style on his semblance than things would be so much better, there was so much potential and so much to look forward to, his semblance was one of the more interesting ones but no, author go berd a few time, so much he could've done and so much potential for a better story all wasted and into the trash. I've ranted long enough and I'll end it here, afterall it cant get any worse right? Edit: it doesn't get any better
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