/ Fantasy / The Library of Lost Souls
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A tale of dreams and reality in a place full of mystery and shadow.
This is my first work so criticisms and tips are welcomed.
I stare blankly at the girl in front of me. ”What? Wh-what did you say. . .” She blinks, then smiles again, understanding and sweet, “Welcome to the Library of Lost Souls. ”
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I'm intrigued of what exactly is the MC. You should continue writing this :)))) I'm sure some of readers will be intrigued bec of the first chapter. Keep writing :))
Really strong start, I love the spelling and grammar ability that you've displayed. But that does come with a burden, and a few mistakes tend to be glaringly obvious. You really only need to work on that, and maybe increase the word count per chapter, but other than that, you are doing a great job!
To all the future readers who crave suspense and a mystery, you’ve found a good read. There’s unease in these virtual pages as the journey unfolds. Read on if you dare...