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Hey you wait

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Author: Jay_Mhekzy

4.76 (14 ratings)

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uniqueanime2

_Great read, the characters are well established_ -chapter one is very well written,and very attention grabbing,and so good I'm adding it to my library. -The synopsis could be better, you should make it attention grabbing,or add bits from chapter 1 to it. -I can tell this story is going to be really good😭! _I recommend this highly_

3yr
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mona_keshwari

, Hello truly a wonderful start, like the best friend trope u created, it connects to readers more than u think.... it touches the emotions as we all have friends, we imagine,..... writing quality is good, hope u update soon [img=recommend][img=update]

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REMUS
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Really cool, I like this highschool romance setting and the obligatory drama that comes with it. It gives me Heather vibes with those girls somehow...^^ The writing is good and very detailed. The story is well-paced, keep it up, I can learn from you when it comes to romance plots.

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Drapetomaniac12

I felt like I was reading one of the books on wattpad, hehe. There are some minor typos but overall, it's a good book. Recommend it for a light reading! Keep writing, author!

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Jay_Mhekzy

Hi, everyone thanks for the honest review so far. Your words are really encouraging! I'll put in my very best to make this book turn out great

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RJMidnight

Your story is good, but romance is not my cup of tea, I really dislike it ( because if that, I did not go far into the story, I read up to 6 chapters). But, people who like romace should read your story. It is a realistic **** romance story. I enjoy the way you build everyone’s character, even the teachers. I like your writing style, it has a comedy fill to it. The only problem I had with the story is the grammar. If you reread through your chapters, you can fix the small mistakes in them. Other than that, keep up the good work!

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pelzy
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Oh wow, the description is already so good. I have just started reading the book but I am enjoying it. looking forward to more. Good job, author.

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SnowPenguin

The story is extremely well written and the drama hits a really nice spot where stuff happens and means things, but it's not overtop and really, really dumb. The characters are established quickly and well done as well. Small warning for sexual content.

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SolAce

So we see the view from the other side in a friend’s relationship; instead of the ML liking her, it’s her friend. Which is interesting in its own right, not going to lie. The synopsis makes the FL sound like the villainess for some reason though. So when I began to read, I was expecting that. However, she seems to have contrasting sides: one that wants her friend to be happy while the other wants Rey to herself. Not sure if I’m interpreting the story correctly, but that’s how it seems to me. There are some grammar and punctuation issues that I see. The punctuation that seems to be missing the most is commas like in compound sentences. But overall, this has its own unique storyline, and I would suggest to anyone reading this review to check out the book before you make your own assumptions ! Keep up the good work author ! I hope the very best for your book ! (● ˃̶͈̀ロ˂̶͈́)੭ꠥ⁾⁾

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Joskylar

it's a good romantic story. the synopsis was eye catching. And reading it I thought MC as a villain character. But after reading it I got confused. I expected that MC as villian. It's nice one keep going.

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Drakonous

A good story that's just not my cup of coffee. It's not because it's bad (it's not, it's good and dramatic) but rather, I can't stand how realistic the characters are; they are just like teens - real teens - with the way they're acting. Y'know, overly dramatic and like it's the end of the world if their crush dates someone else (this is why I always dates older women. Well, that and they tend to have bigger boo- ahem, I digress). The story is actually good and I'm curious about what's the ML's, Rey, backstory but Winter ... God help me, I've known girls like her. If you really want to get the guy's attention then you gotta stop being meek and actually act more like yourself and, more importantly, date someone else. Trust me, being yourself always gets the guys attention. Anyways, I digress (again). The story, grammar, and everything else is great and it's a good story for the Teen Romance genre. In fact, you should probably publish this work on Wattpad too, there's a lotta **** readers there that would love and support it.

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ZOA
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The synopsis is quite good. I liked the plot and your description. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon.......

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Aciee_GelaTin

The synopsis seems interesting and the plotline has a good flow. So far, I've only read up to the seventh chapter. Character design is well-written and so is their interactions. The switching of point of views is also a great addition to enhance the story's development. A nice work, overall.

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Lullabybao

Oh my, what a good book. The story line progresses quite smoothly. and j am a great fan of this mc. Except for few typos here and there, overall it's a good book.

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