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Yo, I’m back and just as broke so definitely don’t own Naruto, Danmachi, or any of its assets... like cmon if I did would I be writing trash novels on here? IF YOU RECOGNIZE ANYTHING IN THIS NOVEL FROM SOMEONE ELSES WORK I DO NOT OWN IT WHAT SO EVER...DONT AND I MEAN DONT COPYRIGHT STRIKE MY SHIT YAAA HEAR ME? Have a nice day
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This fanfic really has some problems, like the development of the MC which was not very good and the other characters have a very weak presence and seem unimportant. But these are acceptable problems that I would expect to see in a beginning author. I personally am not very picky (especially with fanfics and free content) and I really liked the story. Overall it is a good fanfic, it may be a good idea for the author to read other danmachi fanfics like Wish Fullfiment System and study the intention among the characters to improve their fanfic and bring the story to life. Thanks for the good job author-san !!! (Sorry for any errors i used google translator)
Yo your least favorite shameless author that donated his own powerstones to his novel YES ITS ME... well im here to explain a few things 1st dont except anything from this novel I am a noob when it comes to writing 2nd If you dot got anything productive to say or viable reasons as to what you dont like about my novel just leave 3rd If you are not enjoying my novel leave you arent needed her go fInd something that will tickle your fancy
Un gran fanfic si, pero la gramática sinceramente es una mierda, es ilegible le saca todas las estrellas a la trama y a los sentimientos una mierda cuando lo edites bien le daré otra reseña
I kinda don't like the feeling the Mc has that he doesn't know anything but that's my preference I guess it probably could be written a bit better but it is pretty nice novel nonetheless.
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I actually love this it's a good story I like the development so far also i love that take has a companion. LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLL
Amazing!