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“The fragrance of your love always flows in my veins,” Asher said coming dangerously closer to Louisa
“How do you?” Louisa asked shocked. For some unexplainable reason her heat skipped the rhythm listening to those lines
“Babygirl from now on you will only be answering my questions” Asher spoke caging Louisa in his arms
“The past is gone just like the water under the bridge, you can’t get a second back; what matters is ‘now’ the right now and where will we go from here” he whispered into her ears smiling viciously
The way he said those lines contemplated something in her mind “Why do his eyes look like the ones I knew?” she thought trying to get out of his tight embrace which is making her feel suffocated.
“I am loving this Babygirl, where I can see you out but you can’t see it; It’s giving me inevitable pleasure,” he said leaning towards her lips but she pushed him away
“Babygirl; if you are still thinking of running away, you better give up that silly idea of yours. You don’t have any other way than this as we had our destinies trapped together,” Asher said following her
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Louisa Miller: Born with a silver spoon in the affluent Miller family. She is strong, independent, and talented. Some memories were engraved deeper into her heart than the tattoos on her body. Life was never easy for her but she knows how to beat the hurdles and rise against the odds
Asher Carter: Mystery runs in his blood. He is like the brightest moon, who still have a darker side which scared him about the worse things it can do and one day everything he was scared of happening, happened and it changed everything.
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This novel has a mix of all the emotions ranging for happiness to mysteries, with the unexpected twists and turns I believe that the story can keep you hooked. The starting chapters maybe a little lousy but every chapter is important for the main crux of the story. I hope you will shower the love, feel free to comment, and correct my mistakes.
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A very interesting plot. I'm so excited to read more. Waiting for more chapters and a mysterious and intriguing story. all the best author garu.
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This is a great story to read. The characters were so gripping. I think Louisa has some kind of connection with the MC in the past and you are increasing the surprise factor with every chapter. I am looking forward to see how the story will be going
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The story has lot of interesting characters, which can hold our nerves and increases curiosity by each passing minute. I wish to know what had happened in the past and how the story unfolds😍😍😍
Wow... You deserve more views than this, cool MC, nice plots and characters, good writing style. A huge thumbs up to you author... Keep it up.
Hey.. I really loved your story. .the Mc is badass, I really liked her character. Well also your story line is good.I hope you doing well. Good luck.
I give this book one hundred stars! There is a nice plot and interesting scene. I can't wait to find out what happen next!!! Keep it up!!!👍👍👍
Iam just loving this story. This story captivated me lot. Every character is moulded in such a way that it is increasing my curiosity. Waiting for more updates. I want to see what is the past Lousia holds. I want to know the relation between Asher and Evan. Lots of love....
The main thing I have to talk about this story is character designing. I found that very interesting. Another thing I have to mention about this story is that its going on at the same pace since beginning to ending which is quite interesting for us to read. Really looking forward for more stories from you
Your way of presenting the story is something I'm amazed at. I really loved your character designing which is the basement of a story. Iam really looking forward for more stories from you. Lots of love to your story❤️
your writing quality is excellent. I don't know how to rate your story because it is awesome. your story is totally different from all other stories. I wish more and more good stories from you
This is the most intriguing plot I have come across, every character is built in such a way that they build the curiosity. I am so looking forward to see how Louisa and Asher are going to be. All the best
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Now I see a lot of potential on how you write romance and tragic title and contents ahead of it. I would just gladly suggest something upon reading the synopsis of your story. The synopsis was quite a bit long for me and it feels like you dump the information of what will the story become at the climax. Remember that the synopsis must be written on making the readers know the brief overview of what will happen and it will make them much more curious about what will the story be ahead of them. Overall, you have a good concept, and keep it up! You will get there!
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