Is it Wrong to be Reincarnated after Death?

LV 4

watashiwavdesu

I state that so far only 10 chapters have been released, so this review is considered "to trust". I read a lot of fan fiction about danmachi, really many and every time there were two options to choose from. The tragic past, or one that is never explained in detail because it matters little to them. There is a third category however. I would call rarities among the rarities, where the past is simple, coincided and really serves to give more depth to the main character. This novel has one of these past. You have surely already been able to read something or if you have not read it, just read the first line. " I am cancer-stricken" essentially what it says. From here the past evolves and explains who are the protagonists that act in his previous life, and we can discover a bit of the personality of the protagonist from the first chapters, avoiding all the information of little account or meaningless.. Certainly little is taken into account about his mother, it was a bit put aside just because it wasn't important in the novel itself and could only serve to enrich the backstory more, but we know that by her character, she has always been close to the protagonist. I think the writing quality is excellent, the descriptions aren't boring and are put in order to stimulate the reader to continue reading, everything proceeds with a moderate speed, the plot is not fast but not slow, it evolves chapter after chapter in a stable way. The world has yet to be explored properly, I mean it’s only 10 chapters but from the expectation I would say that the author will manage without problems. Last but not least, the stability of updates. The author says he has never written before and that this is his first work, yet he manages to write two chapters a day, and they are very long, from the amount of pages no less than 2000 per chapter, someone even over 2500. I don’t know if it’s a natural talent or just that author is a liar, lol. The only thing that should be improved could be the use of even more specific words and more present comparisons to make readers better imagine the scenes that are taking place, but I would say that for a fan fiction on webnovel, the quality is more than good, I’d say it’s of the highest quality. This novel deserves the 2nd place in the ranking.

LV 4

Ashmodai

This story is rather boring and the story development is very slow. The MC is still level 1 at the actual chapter and the prologue alone goes 5 chapters. The skills he gets are not really interesting. The Romance of this fanfiction of a Harem Novel makes no progress cause the MC doesn't get over the gf he had in the prologue which is the only reason why it's so long.

LV 3

PlotArmorSama

I know, it's too early to judge, but so far it was fantastic, I mean it was just his backstory so far. Anyway, his death nothing too exaggerated, he was simply victim to tumour, had to leave his girlfriend alone the day after he confessed (RAIJU GO DIE!! wait he died.... I literally cursed him to death) Anyways, I never felt that his past was unnecessary, It did not feel dragged out for long, neither was I tired of the same cliche backstory, first life, etc etc. rather it touched me emotionally and made my eyes watery... damn onion ninjas... Got reincarnated to Danmachi, has a 'reincarnation system' that will be used to justify some bullsHit author will write. But I sincerely hope he isn't someone like Vahn Mason, I honestly dislike that selfless idiot breaking down every three chapter even after 1000+ chapters, there was no core development in character, same sissy manwhore collecting girls like pokemon, even Ash Kethum did not catch so many pokemons even though the title said "Gotta catch 'em all"... Look at me grumbling now.... So as I was saying, don't make him too much selfless for his own good. He didn't have time to live to the 'fullest' so, maybe this time? He has a good-natured kind elder brother type character, he has shown so far, loyal to one GF, not a harem king mat. and maybe this fic will have late romance, cuz he had difficulty to move on? IDK, just a guess... This is by no means a proper review, cuz it was not meant to be... well I just wanted to express myself and encourage the author to write some good drugs, cuz it has potential in my opinion. GOod LuCk1,

LV 4

Slayer_King_One

Since I am not good with reviews, I will try to follow what webnovel feels should be evaluated and with the same order. - The Writing Quality is excellent. I found no parts written wrong. So it is a fat 5 stars. - Stability of updates is a well deserved 5. Normally I see authors posting several chapters at a time but having 1200-1500 words each, the author not only brings 2 per DAY, but they are also long, some even the size of 3000 words, usually they are between 2000 and 2500. So I don’t think there’s anything else to add as motivation for these 5 stars. - Story development has surprised me more than once so far. The cover of Hestia inspires you to think this novel will be focused on her and then the classic novel where the protagonist follows the original events and distorts them, but so far this has not been the case and indeed, Haru (the protagonist) even has the ability to change the future, which makes me believe that the story will be completely different from the one I already know, which makes me want to hold on to this story among my bookmarks. 5 stars. - Haru was well-thought-out. Even if someone might have something to say about his "selfish" choices, I believe that in his situation I wouldn’t know what else to do but hold onto the people I love most until the moment of death. Of course, we’re all here to see compelling and heroic things, but as it was unique, passionate and above all it’s enough to reach you and make you feel empathy for him, even during his reincarnation, 5 stars so far, also considered his attitude in the world of Danmachi until what we could see. - So far we have been able to get a precise picture of the world, but since there are not enough chapters yet I wouldn't know if this category deserves 5 stars, but going to trust with the author and also reflecting on all the background that has been given behind his past, I entrust myself to the author giving 5 stars in this category too. If you’re still doubtful whether to read the novel or not, start reading the first chapters, if you feel that you don’t like a past a bit more heavy try to ignore it for now and skip directly to the danmachi world. Come back when you have taken empathy with the character, maybe this way you can try even more what the author was able to convey in those chapters, have a good read and stay safe!

LV 3

Qvoth

medium story, weak and crying protagonist, just a cannon fodder, romances in this style are left over in spacebatles, it's not my style. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

LV 4

Catrosious

Since i am a normal person, i give 3!

LV 5

Ragtag

This is a true gem in 10 chapters it has made me laugh and has made me cry the characters are wonderfully developed and the world is a rich and colourful place you are a fool if you don't read this it made my day

LV 3

Maxusssss

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LV 13

kirbyISaTHICCboi

i was on the verge of crying for about an hour reading the prologue. you certainly know how to get people invested in the characters. I commend you on that as much as I hate you for hurting my feelings that much.

LV 13

TheLonelyGod

Fvck, This is good! I never liked Danmanchi Fics, don't know why, but now anymore, I fricking love this development, everything here is as exciting as when I first watched the anime! I see Hestia on the Cover Pic. I wonder if she will be a Love interest or something! anyways, I recommend this fic guys! I was thrilled reading this!! Keep up the good work, Author-san!!!👍👍👍😉

LV 3

Primordiales

It's fun so far but I think you should put in more interactions since it looks like I'm reading a summary and it's kind of bland. Well that's no more and please let the MC not join the Hestia family, it is tiring to have to read so many fanfictions that are always in that family, as for Asumi, the truth is that I want that drama of the bride to end and to move on, Since the girlfriend is no longer his wife, for sure, he already had children, among many things, it is not realistic that a love continues for a long time, at least from my point of view. Have a good day brother, your Fanfic is good, just don't fall for everyone's game and desperately follow the canon, create your story without worrying about the plot and the protagonists since YOUR MC is the main character now the others are secondary, just my thinking xD

LV 14

WattsonSimp

Ima do this again. 10 Chapters. Good grammar better than mine 100%. Backstory its pretty damn good in my opinion. Asumi best girl. 2 Chapters a day uhh I can't even write a paragraph in 30 minutes. I love everything about it right now very good.

LV 4

asaade_ragnarokm

this is a good fanfic and has lot of potential and with an incredible solid backstory compared to most fanfic, the start is great and interesting i wish you luck author and the odds may always be on your favor

LV 12

Dawn_Brigner

It is the first time I cried reading a book just by the first chapters. I don't know how you did it but I got so well immersed in the character it made me cry.

LV 2

Nur_Ahmad_Gifari

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LV 14

leo_Godless

good work good balance waiting for new update only slight problem I have is in the way he show cases the goddess hestia's personality but that is more of a personal opinion otherwise good read and curious to see updates.

LV 13

I_am_inevitable

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LV 3

Primordiales

Very good novel, it has improved a lot from the first chapters. I congratulate you, keep it up and don't let bad comments affect you. There are only some things that I want to say, but they do not affect my rating, it is my personal opinion: there are many things that I hardly see the sense of at first, it is his love, the truth is I did not like it very much I felt it half empty, it is more in Once in a lifetime relationship I saw it as a teenage love, you know that adolescents tend to fall in love a lot, I say that I do not see any sense that is why, you know there are very few couples that start young and end well, I always know They end up separating or have a child in the middle of their relationship and they get together to separate at 20 or 23 years old either because they got tired or because some of the 2 parties were deceived, this is not a lie, it is Real after all to my father As a young man it happened with his ex-girlfriend, he entered a relationship at 16 and they separated at 21 because his ex cheated on him, that's why I say that young relationships are never going to last long, so his love for assuming seemed exaggerated to me, after all they liked each other, liking is not loving, they confessed and went Boyfriends, but would you be dating someone you know you can't be with all your life? Maybe I would do it out of pity or maybe out of appreciation for that person, I would not go into a relationship that I know is destined to break down, that's why I say it is illogical, I assumed I loved Haru, so he was her boyfriend until he died But how was she? How did she feel? Why was she so deeply in love with him so much to enter into a relationship that could break her heart for life? There are many things that I did not like about that beginning, of course you You explained but for me that explanation was very empty, rather that favor that Haru did to assumei can be made of friends and not end in love, and end only in appreciation of a person. Then another point was Haru's feelings, the truth is that .... I have nothing more to say that it was very forced, that of him telling his friend to take care of his girlfriend I did not like him at all, the friend knew that Haru liked it, making that threat of "if you don't tell him I'll take her away" seemed like someone without codes, a person who doesn't have empathy for your friend's feelings, the truth is I don't like him at all, maybe you wanted to portray something else with that but to my liking it seemed very bad, then the protagonist said to take care of her when she dies, another point that I did not like, you know, if I were the protagonist I would not have confessed, if I really loved to assume He should not have confessed to him, he knew that he was going to die, that he did not have time, when they told him that he was only 2 years old, he should have known, that they will never be able to be together, they will not be able to see each other grow up, have children, go out on dates, among many things that couples do, but to one like this he confessed his love, and I did not like it not at all, to start thinking from the point of view of I assumed and you will see that it is not pretty ... Well that is my criticism towards the beginning of the novel and what I did not like about that, as for the rest, this well everything, his power increases constantly and fast, not operational, the MC will not look for women every 5 seconds, women do not fall in love with him at 5 seconds that they meet, I only say one thing is that you watch more anime or manga From romances like this you get inspired and don't do a forced romance, as for the relationships do now they are fine, just don't force them a lot go slow, your novel has the potential to be one of the best, just don't rush, have filler chapters or life retelling chapters where you tell us about the MC's feelings or the things he does in his spare time, don't rush to do the quick action as most always leave it for that. Have a good day brother I hope you continue with your novel ..😘

LV 14

Kabuk5

I think this could have been greater (good so far), the issue I have is that the character doesn't take the time to properly grieve, he literally ran from one place to another and then to the dungeon. Before developing his adventurer stats, he should have taken time to at the least be stable emotion-wise. That's my only issue with the story so far. So hopefully it will keep being a good story and develop further.