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[HIATUS]
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Everyone had that childhood where we assumed life was a rainbow. But, as we grow up, we begin to realize that its opposite was the truth.
This is the case of Sasaki Miyuki, a girl whose life is a chain of suffering and sins. After hearing the tragic news of her former lover's death due to an accident, Miyuki is unable to find the purpose of her life. Losing hope, she drowns herself in the sea only to be placed back behind time. Although it wasn't just anything ordinary, she realized that she had 20 chances to avoid ill fate.
Will she be able to avoid the bad endings using the only limited chances she has?
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Writing Quality: 5 (its very good for a first chapter and a new author) Updates: 4 ( as the author said, they can only update once a week) Development: 5(from the chap we can infer that there will be a complex bg between character) Character: 5( the 5 is for the strong love the Mc has for the love.) World BG: 4 (the BG should be present time as there is not much info) From the first chapter that I read, I can say the author has done a great job of portraying the scenes and emotions beautifully. As it is the first time for auhtor to write a novel, the quality of the chapter can be said to be wonderful. The premise of getting reincarnated and having 20 chances to undo the mistakes she has done before. To undo the mistakes of her past and find her love. It is a romantic guilt pill novel for me. As it is still in chapter1 we have to wait and see if the author can maintain the writing quality and the emotional expressions of the first chapters in the future.
Just an announcement- I know that this is very early, but I'll write another story instead of this story so it means, this story will be on hiatus for a long time. If you wanna know what my story will be, it will be an isekai one. Well... A boy getting reincarnated as a princess. XD So forgive me and please understand.
I read a comment about how the feelings were portrayed beautifully and I highly agree! It sounded very sincere and very relatable. It's not unrealistic, but realistic. I hope you'll create more contents like this, author!
Depressing but so far so good!! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD (I'm gonna write a better review laterz)
I love it! Your story is good than most books in webnovel tbh especially for a new author lol. there are things that might lack, but i still think its amazing. you said so yourself that you're very young, and im very curious to what your age is. lololol. if you're rlly young, i would be surprised. good job
I truly love this! Ah the feels of the prologue was so.... woah. The main character is relatable, and the concept of this is unique. It's like, it's bringing a beautiful message about love rather than those other fan service stories that i've read. lol. keep up the good work, author. i'll support this story. That's what I want to see ;)
A wonderful story for a new author! I hope you'll update more because I'm hooked especially since I'm a hopeless gae romantic. [img=recommend]
I think it needs more detail when it comes to the world background, there are some words that have been used a lot, but it's still good nonetheless. It gives a lot of feelings. The MC may be suicidal, but hey, at least she's very realistic.
Shameless Author 5 Review here. Just to let you know that I'm a beginner at this field and I'm very young as well as please have mercy on your reviews. Lmao. Furthermore, this story will contain straight romance, and girl's love. Although I will be mainly focusing on girl's love while the straight romance will be secondary. My advice is to read the story regardless of the character's preferences about love. But I'm not forcing you to read it. I will provide a story that will give feelings for the readers.