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Pequeña aclaración:
Cada volumen es independiente del otro. Sigue su propia línea de historia y no se ve afectado por los volúmenes anteriores. Bueno, salvo por algún poder o habilidad que se viene arrastrando por el conocimiento y la personalidad del protagonista que va evolucionando.
Volumen 1 Cross over entre nasuverso y Madam ou no Vanadis
Volumen 2 viaje por Juego de Tronos, Señor de los anillos y Dark Soul 3
Volumen 3 Mushoku Tensei y Danmachi.
Volumen 4 Naruto y muchos otros.
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Kain, antiguo vástago del equilibrio. Renació en el mundo de Fate y vivió durante varios siglos. Sin embargo, al encontrarse con su viejo enemigo, el dios Hilden, lucho y perdió.
Ahora su alma viaja a través del multiverso buscando el poder y la forma de volver a aquel mundo por la venganza.
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Reglas del juego:
1.- No hay power up indiscriminados
2.- Todo se estudia y se gana hasta dominarlo
3.- El alma influye sobre el cuerpo, por ende, el cabello y los ojos siempre serán los mismo (ojos color lazuli y pelo blanco).
4.-La fuerza es proporcional al conocimiento adquirido, la técnica y la fuerza del alma.
5.- El nivel del mundo es proporcional al alma. Eso quiere decir que si el alma del protagonista es fuerte, irá a un mundo de mayor nivel.
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Bro, tu novela es uno de los pocos fanficts que tiene su inicio bien desarrollado, con bases sólidas, y una historia que atrapa al lector desde los primeros capítulos. Deseo ver qué tan largo sera tu camino como escritor en esta página y llegar a ver el crecimiento de este fan-fic.
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Es dificil describir lo satisfecho que estoy... For the sake of advertisement, I shall do this review in English. Con el proposito de publicidad, hare esta review en Ingles. Writing Quality: Nigh Perfect Spanish, proper accentuation, the only issue I find is delivery but for English speakers, it shouldn't give you any issue translating this text in google or DeepL. Stability of Updates: Just by seeing the number of chapters, you should have an Idea. Truly the author's perseverance. Character Design: Perfect, 10 stars: Best made OCs I have ever seen. Story Development: More Perfect, 20 stars: This story moves forward too fast, so fast it is actually bad for the story, I hoped it would have more chapters to get more into depth in all the things happening around the world and MC. World Background: Extra Perfect, 30 stars: Time, Locations, weather, background, and world descriptions are never lacking in any chapter. Now my personal opinion. I find myself with found emotions reading the first volume of this novel. It has a few shortcomings... and Flaws that I don't like. But on a personal level, the author just took everything I'd ever wished in a Harem novel and put it in one single volume. And least in the harem sense, there is no doubt, this is the best harem I've ever read and boe I've read a lot of 'em. Let's put them all together: 1.- There is so much vanilla you will leave this please obese and with diabetes. 2.- Challenge, every girl is different they have their own personalities, some are hard to get, some aren't, sometimes they fight with MC, basically, they're not dolls. 3.- MC first girls literally went from servants to fking CEOs of their own company, there's no one of them that's useless, they're not dolls waiting for MC to fk'em and that's it, there are even times MC is at home but they are not because they're working and If there is something I like is successful women, and boe all of them are here, with very few exceptions. 4.- There is no woman in MC's harem that you won't like and there is no woman that will give you a 'neutral' reaction to her, basically, sometimes there are heroines that you don't even care they're there, in my case, it didn't happen. 5.- Best of all: *spoiler* MC won't take any girls through the multiverse or whatever nonsense, he lives his life with them, they die of old age and MC moves on. The way it should be. We got a great development with them, MC and them had kids and were happy, they lived till old age and then they passed away if anything I hated was the lack of drama that could be exploited regarding this subject, but well, it wasn't that bad either. Now let's move to the plot, which is another strong forte in this novel. I don't know others, but the typical 'Otaku was killed by truck-kun and choose and anime and some powers' is the most ridiculous and sickening thing I've read, sometimes it is fun if they know how to handle it, but most of the times, it is sickening. The stories I enjoy the most is when authors take a protagonist or character already defined and insert it in another world as a crossover, MC is not aware that he's in a fictional world at all and doesn't know the events that will happen, that's the best fanfic for me. And this is basically that. MC is Kain from Legacy of Kain, which is a very old game that I used to play when I was a kid... I liked to go through the walls with the sword and that was about it. Now. the premise of an OP vampire not only in power but inexperience going to a world like Madan no Ou, it got me... And it was perfectly developed here. Chapters are very long, and for the most part of the volume, it was like an original story. There first girls of the harem are OCs and they are so well designed and developed that you can't believe they're actually OCs. I could extend myself more but this would be an endless review so... I encourage you to translate this masterpiece and read it if you're an English speaker. Si hablas espanol, échale un vistazo a este novelon.
Lost to a childhood arc. I can't get over it. I just can't... That give so much death March signs that makes me shaking with pure anger. You know what I mean. Kid mc smarter then people around him solving problems of characters. A large cast of females around him and harem tag. What whould be a problem? Oh right, all men's in this novel acts like a toothless childs that have no balls to even bark at girls. And all girls, of course, is very smart, cunning, helpful, and always right....that's happens with all male characters that was introduced so far. Okay, "positive characters". Evill ones have balls. But they are scums... You kinda could get this simple ploy. Right? And my God, kain wasn't so evil maniac, and I am not sure about his character, honestly... But this is pushing all my nerves and tearing my mind. Stop with this nonsense, stop making main character a pet....sigh. Just thinking what whould happens in a future, makes me sad. Like whould he start as a kid every volume? Whould it be the same caustic swamp that I need to get over...? No thanks, I am not desperate enough. P. S. I am not going to give it objective review, and I am not going to even try doing it. Because that's just unholy.
Muy buen desarrolo de la novela,buen desarrollo de los personajes y sobre todo el crecimiento emocional del MC. errores gramaticales de diestra a siniestra pero nadie es perfecto aun asi seriamente quiero seguir leyendo esta historia xD. PD: consejo para es sr.autor: trate de escribir en un español/castellano mas neutro para que quede con un toque mas profecional. (no me quejo pero queria dar mis 2 centavos xD) PD2: sr.autor seria posible que kain aparezca en alguna guerra de la seria FATE y se encuentre con algunas de sus esposas? seriamente creo que seria interesante e iria bien con el desarrollo actual. (nuevamente solo tirando mis 2 centavos xD)
Esta copada Aquí dejo unas ideas 1 hacer un interludio de otro personaje y sus pensamientos del MC 2-explicar cosas como por ejemplo como se hizo el chocolate como entreno cuales son sus pasatiempos y demás 3-explicar apariencias basado en algunas imágenes
es muy interesante su trama y desarrollo de la historia, los personajes te envuelven en ese mundo el cual pareces vivirlo.
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es una buena historia... hasta ahora no tengo quejas, la recomiendo a cualquiera que sea culto 😃
No se como entrar en detalles, solo puedo decir que esta historia es increíble. Tiene una narración y escritura impecable, además tocara tus emociones sobre la familia, el amor, la perdida y mucha acción. Simplemente no te arrepentirás de leerla
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Me gustaria preguntar si es posible que coloque un capitulo auxiliar donde agregue la apariencia del MC Los mundos a los que a fue o viajara Tambien cuantas mujeres o esposas tiene y que especifique de que mundo es osea algo haci junto con cuando conocio al prota y su primera opinion junto a la relacion actual del mismo personaje "ARTORIA PENDRAGON": originaria del nasuverse o FATE