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DevilTriggered: Well,before the rant I actually say something good about story,because story deserved praise.It's better than autor previous work by far,in a plot and ability-definitely.Though in all other aspects like fighting scence and *humor* it's well on the same level,I guess...
But as I said,the story deserved better score than previous one,by huge
margin.It's even top notch if we thinks about webnovel standarts(yeah,apparently 1-star only for works that you can't even read without gettin cancer on terminal stage.)And I actually liked it....
So now let my rant and little story be a warning for all those who have hopes in characters....
There is no hopes...
And yeah,I dissliked rafi in cosmic novel,because you know.He is whinny little b*tch who I believe got pegged by his wife's in as*.But hey,atleast he flirt around and I have hopes that all those fightes and kill's help build up his character and someday,maybe,he would become someone respactable atleast for his wife's......It's dropped,so you can guess.
And here a new one rafi,even worst.Because he is deffinition of Beta-c*ck b*tch from japanese anime culture.Yeah,not even joking...
And I again,was expecting that normal guy in sh*tty situations and with burdens off mass murder can,you know,have some affect on him.That's really how we would have atleast normal guy,oh boi.....
And there is a huge chance that it's cemented desicion,why? Because he is conterpart of someone wicked and evil,he is virtue.....Being femdom b*tch hardly can be a virtue.Most funny thing,he's evil side not even evil.....Oh,gods.
And ofcourse all *love interests* tsundere b*tches.......MY GOD.
It's like one of those novels where crossdresing whiny guy have to deal with yandere girls ,but somehow become even worse....
So yeah,if you liked being slapped on face by woman or femdom in general,that's deffinetly you choice....I have enough.Illimitable Fantasy Works
MajestyDX: Writing EroNovel or anything in that Genre is most welcomed by me. But there are things that shouldn't be written in a novel posting sites like this.
This novels has rape,slavery and all other useless **** that most of the people hate. Making MC a dickhead who is wicked to the boot.
Seriously if it didn't have any rape elements or slavery things I would have rated this 5/5.The Perverted Evil Cultivator
LavishSquirrel: FYI this story has B.D.S.M. in it, pee play i think (idk skipped over it, it was gross), mom-son relationship. As a woman is grosses me out for a dude to have more than 10inchs. its super unrealistic. Also you have any idea how painful it is to take something like that? I had to stop reading after you made it even bigger from his constitution upgrade. Eww gag.The Perverted Evil Cultivator
aspire5515: the harem fanfiction protagonist racial traitIllimitable Fantasy Works · C11
Daoist791629: Я напишу этот обзор на русском, так как знаю её лучше и мне так удобнее:
В начале это хорошо, но потом надоедает - после 400+ глав не видно никакого развития отношений с девушками, только секс и все... нет ничего другого, что очень расстраивает.
Он постоянно говорит что хочет детей, а потом говорит что не готов к ним... эм... что?
Его характер меняется очень быстро - то он джентльмен, а потом извращенец, дальше чуткий парень.
Может убить за попытку изнасилования своей (потом) девушки, но даже не злится на попытку убить женщину с которой у него неоднозначные отношения.
В одной главе он говорит одно, но в следующей другое. (Вы точно заметите)
Некоторых девушек он берет насильно, не заботясь об остальном, но с другими устривает корейские драмы не замечая их чувств.
Он не держит свое слово: МС сказал Куроке что заведет с ней котят при брачном сезоне, а при приближений сроков переносит это до конца школы... но проблема в том что мы даже не знаем сколько времени прошло с 1 главы!!!
Он как герой манги в котором герою вечно 16 лет!!! Нет прогресса во времени ( Т_Т )
От этого возникает чувство потери и дискомфорт.
Мир: микс из разных аниме, не очень понятно.
Гарем: слишком много девушек (это не плохо, но он долго отвергает чувства одних и резко принимает чувства других. Даже если это лишь дело времени - неприятно)
Вывод: читайте если вас не беспокоит вышеперечисленное.Start by Becoming a Mangaka
Sevi_01: 100+ chapters and nothing exiting happened ⊂(￣(工)￣)⊃⊂(￣(工)￣)⊃⊂(￣(工)￣)⊃⊂(￣(工)￣)⊃⊂(￣(工)￣)⊃⊂(￣(工)￣)⊃⊂(￣(工)￣)⊃⊂(￣(工)￣)⊃⊂(￣(工)￣)⊃⊂(￣(工)￣)⊃⊂(￣(工)￣)⊃⊂(￣(工)￣)⊃Playing with other Supernaturals
Nameless_Godless: Slightly Above average overall like the other reviews I find some of this to be great.......filler that is high quality filler but still filler plot wise absolutely nothing has happened of any real importance that actually made a change to the story and the changes that do happen don't do anything.
One bad point now a good point the relationship development is amazing.
Bad point the relationship between him and any woman in general is awful when it comes to women the mc is a copy and paste spineless mc you find everywhere on here if they say something and they have tits they are right you are wrong you should apologise it is actually so bad that if someone told me "Cardin goes through surgery and gets tits so the mc immediately apologized to him turned around bent over dropped his pants and let Cardin plow him in front of the whole school." I couldn't disagree because it's possible THAT'S how bad it is
Good point the mc has an interesting backstory that come with mental problems that the author isn't afraid to let show
Bad point the moments where it affects him are really weird his trauma triggers in a crowd but not when he is in a literal torture machine
Good point he has really interesting powers
Bad point never explores them and has used them like twice
Good point has a cool magic book
Bad point do I even have to say? Never uses it
This all from chapter 71 right as coco forces him to go to an interview he doesn't want to go to for good reason but hey she has tits!
(I will continue to read and will change this based on what happens..... until I finally give up hope on this going anywhere good.)Akashic
Kriuswer: That's how it just came out for me. Mc is a higher devil. A noble family like Rias. And in such families, children and even more so heirs are treated differently. But calmly the MC character will be developed.Black dragon of hate _ High School DXD Fanfic · C11
EndlesslyHarem: You make too many complicated things. And this makes your work stagnate. I feel bored reading this story, it's hard to explain how. The point is because you often make complicated things like him die once again and also when the MC will be here, like that. Even this is already 100+ bad luck !. This is what is boring in your work. Think carefully, even though you have just made your own work, but because you have read other novels, of course you can understand what we readers feel bored reading your work.
And before I explained to the review but you deleted it, hehe, what is this?Harem God of Origin (ATG)
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AizenJabberwock: I already red the identical story development in another DxD fan fic on this very site, down to the fake death. Not sure if it was Dandelion Duke of devils or the one where the mc has both fire and ice powers with a fate system.TRAVELLING THROUGH HIS PHONE(DXD to ATG every world) · C6
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FanHarem: Not in that manner, Shanks is a humble man despite his power. I want Nik to be somewhat like him, who won't get offended by small stuff and still retain his easygoing attitudeGoddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C70
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FanHarem: I don't understand what you are saying? Do you want more character development for Nik? Or plot development... or is it something else?Goddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C68
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FanHarem: *shrugs* criticism emerges out of difference in opinion, something that no-one can do anything about.
Trying to undermine others just to put your opinion on a high pedestal is hypocrisy. So the best thing to do is— understand the criticism, take and learn anything valuable, and then, move on and live a happy life...Goddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C0
FanHarem: well, the fanfic is free, if that is what you are asking. There won't be extra chapters of the novel on patron so sit tight and just enjoy the chapters free of cost.
But, even after all this you are willing to support me, then I am more than happy to welcome you.Goddess Collector: Every Hole is a Goal · C0
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EndlesslyHarem: Cliches and difficult to read because of poor placement and grammar. That's all my opinion in the first to second chapters.TRAVELLING THROUGH HIS PHONE(DXD to ATG every world)
KxV09: I am a patron so you probably should drop this since the author made it clear what their novel will be like
I personally like it but if you don’t like the first 150 then you probably should find another one bookHarem God of Origin (ATG) · C150
Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C150
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