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All around the kingdom Vastei joyous voices rang.
"A prince has been born! All hail the King!" Someone had shouted.
Children laughed, adults made merry in the sunny afternoon light. Yet there was one that had disappointment written on him. A fourteen year old boy with platinum blonde hair and eyes covered by a black cloth. Dressed in a loose-fit buttoned shirt and brown cloth trousers the boy ran through the crowds, a large cat right behind him as he was heading towards the castle at the edge of the valley of which the village was built on.
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nice book, I already did a review but it's not popping up so I'm posting another one :) keep up the book! I'm really excited to know what happens next!!!
It's only the first chapter so I dont really know but it seems like a nice book so far! really excited for the next chapters![img=update] I cant wait!!!
Quite good so keep up the good work. There are sometimes that I forget the main character is blind so if the author reads this that might be something to try to play up on more. Other than that it's a pretty good story so far.
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I was searching up a different story called His Eyes but this one popped up first so I was like I guess I'll read it it's actually not bad for a fantasy story tho im not toooooo into fantasy
I like it but could you update more???? I mean one time you update 3 times in a week then another it's only 1 so what gives??? Anyways I do like the characters at least
Cute story so far! I love how different the main charater is I keep reading his voice like monotone lolol.... But really i kinda dont like how short the chapters are i wish there was more!!!![img=coins]