Being Special Is Such A Pain In The Ass

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ZenNeedsCoffee

Thoughtful and honest review after 3 chapters into reading.... honestly, i could not bear to read the next chapter after reading the prologue but i manage to read until chapter3. The writing quality, The title and the synopsis caught my eye while i am in a novel hunting mode. This made me think..'ooh interesting but why is there only 1 review?' I can tell you did not put much effort to write the prologue as there was almost no description or anyway to help me understand the story other than the conversations. The conversations are also very confusing for me to read. What makes me so speechless is the "what do you want?". Just how could the mc say that to her mother as she is desperately try protect them (1 star however i will do it 0 star tbh). About the grammar, i have already gave up. story development: 0 to 100 real quick. You need to build the story step by step. be steady~...2 stars character design: 2D characters with little or none in depth to their personalities at all (maybe there is)...3 stars i understand that you are new but still..the effort- anyways, good luck to you author~

LV 1

leorichard2021

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