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A thrilling and an adventurous story of a young girl called Rachael who is desperate to find and protect her baby brother Ray from the dark forces and wants to get back to her world to unite with her parents.
She is held hostage at a strange place by a stranger who is enchanted by her and has held her captive. While she is confused on whether to trust or not to trust the stranger, and plans her escape journey she encounters dangers all along the way.
As she fights the various emotions she goes through will Rachael succeed in saving her brother and unite with her parents ? Will she fall in love with the stranger or grow to hate him? Will she succeed in escaping from his growing advances or will she surrender to him ?
Read to know why the dark forces are behind her brother who she dotes on. Who helps her in her journey to save Ray? What superpowers does Ray? Why are there many people out there to help out?
Indulge yourself in thrilling and an adventurous journey of Rachael.
**Slow burner and chapters mostly released as per authors convenience.
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Hey author! Read your story. Must say your work has some real potential. I find your plot kind of unique and intriguing. I am a novice in writing myself so I cannot comment much, also I don't have much knowledge to share. But from what I read and interpreted the synopsis chapter you have is not really needed. If you create all the questions for the reader then it takes a certain element away from the story. Since you have already provided with a summary on the homepage of the story there should be no need for the synopsis to be included in the story. But, of course, that's just something I think. From what I have learnt- Start with a bang up chapter to reel the reader in. End your chapters in such a manner that makes them wanna stay and continue reading. In writing a story, the question- What happens next? is very important for both the readers and writers. You're doing a great job so far, keep it up!
As always, a pros and cons review from me. Pros: A well built world. An interesting plot about the main character, Rachel, finding her brother. The buildup might seem a bit slow, but it's worth it! The character design is also well done. Can't wait to see more about the magic. Cons: Grammar. That's the only thing holding the author back. Otherwise, the author is in good shape! I enjoyed it a lot!
From me 5* for hard work ;) Well done! An interesting story! I like so much the improvement ;) Characters are expressive, storyline keeps reader's attention, dscriptions are fine... Keep working!
Very interesting plot and characters. The pace is thrilling yet gripping. Really talented author. This one looks promising folks. Give it a shot, you might just get hooked. So far the main plot is yet to unfold, waiting for further chapters. Good luck Author!
The mystery propels the reader forward starting from our mc, who in my opinion, seems to be relatively kind and smart. There are a few issues I want to point out though: 1. While mc seems to be intelligent, it does baffle me somewhat when she didn’t use her powers to at least fight back ( if I remember correctly, mc did talk about this about how she ‘forgot to fight back’, which is slightly unrealistic in my eyes ) 2. Paragraphs are lengthy, which makes it more difficult for the readers and I to comment or help you out with grammatical errors. 3. There are multiple grammars errors, which even if I could comment, I would still struggle to point it out unfortunately. So this problem ( 3rd one ) is related to the second one. 4. Flow could be better, but I believe if you correct the grammar errors, your flow will automatically improve by a large margin. All in all, this novel needs a bit more polishing before it can truly shine, but don’t give up, Author ! We always learn from somewhere, and I hope you consider my critique as my advice to you as a fellow writer. Keep up the good work !
Very well, I don't tend to read a lot of mystery stories, but I think that I have read enough of them to know when a mystery story is good or not. And in the case of this one right here, the author as nailed all the points that make a good mystery enjoyable. First a setting that makes us think is what wins the medal here add the very engaging characters and it's perfect. And to top it all off, it's very well written with no mistakes that I took notice off. All in all, it's a great mystery novel and one that I will surely come back to.
Hi Author! So, I've read the first chapters and your story is interesting, the writing quality is easy to understand too, just not my cup of tea. But I like how you set the scene in a first-person pov. I gave you power stones to support, keep up the good work!
This is so far full of enigma, thanks to the lack of dialogues or monologues moreover the story was told in first person perspective, adding the mystery aura. I don't want to spoiler anything for I still figure it out what really happened in this story, and that's what makes me want to read it again and looking forward for the next chapters.
The author has a very nice writing, good punctuation as well. The story has a sense of mysterious and intriguing plot. Really can't stop reading once you've started. Slow pace, but a good character design. Overall, it's a recommended book!
Wew the story seemed enigmatic, mysterious and interesting so far. I didn't even notice the chapters flying by as I read. I hope the stranger is not a villain :P and gets the girl xD Keep up the great work author!
The author has a story to tell us, readers and alike. Even though he was still practicing, he was an experienced reader which was seen on his writings. The story's prologue was attention-grabbing and it has a nice pacing and character development. To all readers, please give this book a try and you might be hooked! Kudos author!
Hello everyone , This is the author here. This is my first book In webnovel and my first attempt at writing. I am posting this review as i wanted to really thank everyone who has reviewed the book so far. Along with positive feedback i have had, i had some authors who helped me with improving the novel by providing insights into what a good Novel should look like. Thanks for all the reviewers. Looking for more reviews and feedback from readers to help me take this novel readers. Thanks for the great reviews and advanced thanks for all the future reviews.
Interesting Book. Well done Author The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall nice and will desperately wait for the upcoming chapters. And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend]