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I'm currently placing this novel on an indefinite hiatus. I want to get back to it, but I just don't really have the time. Also, if I do ever get back to writing this, I'll be rewriting the entire story with better planning and plot. You can read what's published if you want. Just know it stops at a pretty awkward place :/
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What could you do if you found out you could time travel—no catches and no drawbacks?
Go back in time to fix a mistake? Pass the night in a second? Run through the finish line as fast as a car?
Damien had the ability to do all this and more, but before he could even learn to control this power, he was introduced to the second temporal dimension. Thrown through several worlds of the multiverse, he finds that in reality, anybody could manipulate time.
This is the story of a boy from a world where time travel is only a fantasy, the travels of an adventurer who visited thousands of worlds, and the growth of the first being who obtained control of all time.
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"You are sensitive. Find that muscle I am pushing. If you can control it, then we will be able to escape this time period."
"The sapling suddenly started to grow. Its trunk got thicker and darker, and a layer of bark formed over it. More branches shot out at the top from multiple directions. On them, newer and larger leaves grew, blocking the sunlight. And finally, small, white and pink flowers budded, bloomed, and wilted. In their place were small, green fruits. The fruits grew, turning into large, plump, bright-red apples"
"An aura formed around my body. Outside, time seemed to slow. The snow pushed out of the way in slow motion, and finally, I stepped up to the top of the thick snow. With my supernatural speed, I could easily run across the soft ground to my prey without falling in. The deer turned its head slowly. Its eyes were filled with distress as I closed in on it. And with one final leap, I sent my dagger into its neck. Crimson blood sprayed out and painted the snow red."
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[Waring] Some violence and blood.
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....Exciting. Please excuse my language, but- HOLY S%*T. THE MC IS SOLID, THE WORLD IS (currently a blank canvas), AND THE CONCEPT IS AMAZING. easily thrown in my library, but the current way things are, it makes me think the mc is gonna suffer more than me playing dark souls 3 HAHAHAHAHA
To be honest it's great everything is just perfect. I love it. The imagination here is really great. And while reading I can feel each scene happening in front of me. I am really blown away. Not really into these types of novels but this novel has grabbed my attention for sure.
Author, how..how could I describe your story that its toooo good :)) Reading the first few chapters, I like the way its written because they're detailed and can also let the reader visualize what did the character did. I also relate to the MC on chapter 2. keep writing
Honestly, one of the best book you will get thrilled. You will have goosebumps on early chapters, then meet with mysteries of time-walkers. I liked the characters as well as descriptions. I hope Author-nim keep its how its like ++++
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beginning not so good when he lands in forest it peeks then when he leaves it goes down a bit then stays at that level sometimes dropping imensley and going back up . . .. . . . . .big spolier big spoiler dont scroll .. . . . . .. . he is at the tryouts waiting there at the stands with 2 other people apart of his team the guy fighting is good and when he sees ehs in danger me helps him then the trainer sees he has potential he trysout ya yda good score not enough he needed rejects offer even after being pressured it happens second time except this time more life and death headmaster notices implies his friend wont get in if he doesn't go mc only met them a few days ago refuses even after being pressured by the headmaster and then the team breaks down he leaves because he relies he isn't really apart of the team he was just hitchhiking and got to involved took half his cash left theother half for some reason. .. .. . . . . .. then he goes to the guild to get an id then he sees team weird interactions and a bit cringe then he gets id he gets a sale pitch and turns out he can just not have to work and be aloud to teleport to different places (he cant go change worlds) h saw the sweet deal and took it then more cringe then he meets them because he told them where he was going because cringe then he gets roped into some more stuff and then were at the point (left out some cringe) tldr bad start then one good arc next arc kinda wishywashy because some moments mc is being to moody and some moments an annoying teammate cant respect that he doesnt want to do things. ill explain what i mean by moody he goes "we were fighting separate battles there wasn't an ounce of teamwork between you guys and me " something like that what most think is a better option is u meet me 2 days ago give me my money im leaving. . . . . . . .then again not my book oh and one more thing i wish to see the mc make trees trap someone
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So with Volume 1 (Seed to Tree) finally finished, I thought of putting my own (probably biased) review as the author. It seems to be a tradition on this platform. These first 26 chapters simply introduce the protagonist, Damien, and the concept of time traveling in this universe. The first half involves a bunch of world hopping, while in the second half, our MC settles down to train his temporal skills. In my personal opinion, I thought the plot was a bit all over the place in these chapters, especially with all the world hopping going around. Some people did tell me it was interesting though, so I guess it's fine. I promise you the world hopping will slow down in the future so that I can focus on describing each world in more detail. But really big thanks to Nyype, who pointed out some pacing problems in the latter half. I managed to expand 2 chapters into 8 to fill in the time skips :) For the characters, I tried giving them each their own personality. But one thing I must point out is: don't expect the characters introduced here (other than the MC) to be appearing much in the next volume. They will become important later, though. I also think I grew the MC quite a lot, especially in the later chapters. You'll see it once you get there. Next is world background. As I said before, I didn't focus too much on describing every world we visit in this volume. The last world, though, is pretty well described because of the long time we spend there, though there isn't really that much to say about it. Now the minor stuff: updates and writing. I updated this volume 3 chapters per day, but that was only because I had enough chapters stockpiled. For the next volume I will be going down to 1-2 per day. I put all of my chapters through Grammarly to check my writing. Some were even put through that twice. And I swear, I rewrote some chapters like 2 times. Also note that future volumes won't be this short. This one is only 26 chapters because it's kind of like an introduction/prologue to the rest of the story. Okay I probably went a bit overkill here but whatever. It's already written.