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What would be the story of Naruto if there were a twin sister for him?
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I really love the story until now and the idea of making a younger sister for Naruto is very good and we can see thats it help Naruto and until now the story follow the mai story witH just the addition of Hina in the story.
this is the greatest fanfic ever more should come author thanks for the good work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
You really really need a good translator or an editor Your grammar sucks tbh but the idea of your story is great and I guess its good if this is your first fic . Don't be in a hurry to post your chapters . Take time but at least post it with as less mistakes as possible .
My man yogi...you got a great imagination and story writing skills.....really good one....we must create a chess manga.i am looking forward to that
The beginning of fanfiction interesting😊! But I would like more descriptions and dialogues... I hope this improves over time🙃. There are few chapters, so it is still difficult to judge the main character🌸.
The grammar and spelling have a few mistakes but overall still 👌👌 [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Really good read with some minor language problems........ .. ................. .. ..... ......................................................
There is no system at all and some stuff just feel hum weird? not sure how to explain it ---------------------------------------------------
Eu não gostei porque parece repetivo(o designer parece ser so o naruto feminino), a autora não parece ter se esforçado para criar um personagem vivo (a personalidade da protagonista parece a do percy Jackson, do filme, quase não vejo ela com raiva, mesmo presenciando o tratamento do naruto), e a gramática não ajuda, sem falar que a protagonista é a tipica protagonista que é metida e fala muito, parece ate se esquecer que esta no corpo de uma criança
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The idea is interesting, but there is not much development in the plot, it moves very fast and without obstacles, there are no ups and downs in the story to bring emotion, it is basically a straight line without much emotion in the story, for me this fan-fic is more like a '' wish fulfillment '' than a fan-fic focused on a new story inside naruto with the addition of his sister, but anyway, it's not a bad idea, just written in an amateur way, it doesn't mean that is bad.
Up till now it is great. I love it. I hope it will continue to be great in the future. Character development is good. At first few chapter are short but as chapter increases its length also increases great.