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15 Year old Daniel lives his life as a regular high school student would, with a decent social status and relations with everyone in school. Everything appears fine for him. However in reality he looks upon everything he does in school as nothing more than a waste of time and disregards his peers as fools in his head, isolating his heart from those around him. Until he meets Jasmine, a girl who has the intellect and wit to match his cynicism. Read as their high school journey progresses. Will Daniel finally find someone he can open up to?
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The plot started off with our mc, a high schooler who has a pessimistic view on life. His dialogues with the other students really show his character; however, I would like to add that since the development is somewhat slow, I would like some redeeming quality or characteristic that draws me toward him regardless of his pessimism. ( This is only my advice though, so feel free to ignore if that clashes with your plans ) Main issue is the grammar. I would say I found run-on sentences every 1-2 paragraphs, and a few misspellings here and there. The misspellings I could somewhat ignore, but the run-on sentences really did prevent me from immersing well since I am somewhat sensitive to grammar. My recommendation is to try Grammarly or another grammar correcting app as well as combing your chapters about a day or two later after being written to see it with fresh eyes. All in all, this was a romance book with good potential, and any readers, who read my review, please take the time to check the book out before passing by as who knows. You might fancy it. :3 And don’t get discouraged, Author ! Many have tread the road you are heading towards. Even if you improve little by little, that will add up in the long run, so keep it up !
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I liked your story, and I like how different it is from the others. This book is something I have never read before, something new, and I just loved it. It's so Amazing. Good work author, keep up the good work! ❤💙💚💛💜😍
Hi guys if you haven't read the latest chapter. I am taking a break/going on hiatus due to promotional exam upcoming and I need to focus on my exams. I am very sorry but Simply because will not have a proper upload schedule until after october. I hope you guys understand. Once again I'm sorry.
This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed with more readers!
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I don’t like romance, but I always give an honest review. Your story plotline is interesting and there is some comedy mixed inside. I like your writing style in the first chapter, but for some reason you changed it up after that on the dialogue part. There are a few grammar mistakes than can easily be caught with rereading it and there are times that I am confused on the POV. Other than that you have doing nice going here, keep up the good work!
I rarely read romance stories, but this one is quite a treat. The romance in this novel isn't that bad, actually. I would say... it's kind of realistic to how people would act. I loved how Jasmine slowly pierced through Daniel's shell. The beginning reads a lot like Oregairu. (It's not hard to see that influence. Or I could be totally wrong about this.) But, yeah, this story is quite good. Give it a try, if you are into romance.
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This is a nice story to read. The main character's views in life seem interesting and so is Jasmine. The story needs proofreading in most chapters but overall, the story seems promising and good to read in free time. Keep it up author!
This story is lit bro! I gotta say I'm impressed! May your novel be successful in the future! Overall, this has quality and a great read! Good job! BTW, I am from review swap! Good luck reviewing!
I like how you started the book and the characters are so real and vivid. Great work on the plot. Few mistakes in writing but ignore them if you want. I can feel the school year experience in the book clearly. Great job on the book writing.
Dear author, your book are totally great. Just wanted to say that I find your story are totally interesting! Please keep up your excellent work 😆😆 Also, if you have time kindly check out my book too!
Beautiful piece of literature. The author created well rounded and relatable characters and made them go through things familiar to a lot of us. Kudos dir a job well done.
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This story is quite different from the normal book that I read, which makes it interesting. It is refreshing. It gives you a unique perspective in the life of a young protagonist. It has a lot of potential. Keep working on it.
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Hi guys author here kind of a cheap thing to do but eh im gonna do it anyways I really hope you guys enjoy the book and continue reading it. I am quite aware of how different my book is from the general content of webnovel since its a pure slice of life drama and romance series without any gimmicks but I am still passionate about this story and really hope you could give me a chance to show that to you guys. I will always do my best to improve and get better and yes i have started using grammarly