Mob In Khr

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Alfha_Robby

well nothing to read here, don't expect some awesome plot since author himself seems like anime watcher only so expect some contradiction but the plot basically stay similar with cannon with some bits different. the story mostly revolve about the halfass attempt of mc to stay away from the plot which obviously won't happen mostly. those who never read the manga or watch the anime may have a hard time following what's happen since there's no description of the character & the motivation between each character beside tsuna being typical ditzy , Takeshi the high jump kid & the lazy mc. to put in nutshell this is just your typical 2 Dimensional self insert character. if you don't care about the quality you might enjoy this story.

LV 4

Wriothesley_Main

This is really good👍👍 different from most fanfics where the MC joins the plot, this one has a MC where she highly avoids it. It's been a while since we saw a lazy character and it's one of my fav so that's a plus. The interactions between character is really funny especially with reborn🙃🙃 I look forward to more of this, SO DON'T YOU DARE DROP IT!! Good Job Author-sama😆😆😆

LV 4

Rayama

Well... The mc has no brain... What else can I say but braindead. Sure its meant to be funny that she gets dragged into the mafia family business etc, buttttt shes so serious about avoiding them and wanting nothing to do with them but still manages to do exact opposite of what she wanted to do. Welp gl anyway author

LV 5

Naaaaaaa

Not the best nor the worst. The quality of writing is ok and has little to no gramatical and spelling errors. Updates are pretty consistant but at this time of writing if it follows the trend of most new stories itll stop updating in about next month to the next 4 months (i hope this dosent happen cuz i dont see a lot of female lead characters or lazy protaganist that work decently) Overall its a fun read so far by wut i assume to be a relitivly new author so keep up the good work and enjoy being in this small community author :)

LV 5

Sirione

it was acceptable even before mukuro appeared ... it seems that the author completely ignored vindice and did not give any explanation about it ... and this forced interest that appeared out of nowhere in the mc for mukuro.

LV 4

Wolf_lore11

is good ............ ............ ............

LV 3

Cely_Varela

———————————————————————————————————————— I am speechless. This is one of th greatest books I have read on Webnovel that’s actually completed!

LV 4

Red_Forshaw

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JF48_Faith

absolute master piece!! i like the mc and it just make me feel giddy!!! and excited!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 1

HiddenBoss

This novel was beautiful you made me clap at a book who claps at a book I did because that was in the best entertaining s*** I've ever seen I loved it we need more of your kind author-sama you're so f****** awesome I want to read more of what you write best novel ever

LV 14

Isaac_Cramp

Loved the characters and the Way The story was written. the ending was a great close and would love too see a part 2. Would recommend any day of the week.

LV 3

scarlett_hellsing

now this is the first review ever doing. I would say it's a good read though like I said in one of my comments it feels rushed. the chapters were short however I'm used to that from other novels/books. it was detailed enough that my imagination could fill in the blanks but someone with a lesser imagination might have a hard time.

LV 13

Mercifull777

I honestly don’t know why this novel doesn’t get more love, i mean its one of my favorite. When i first started to read this i actually dropped it for a while, but picked it back up cause i was bored and then proceeded to read the entire thing in a few hours. The start of the book is in my opinion not very good, but it just gets better and better as time goes on. I highly recommend this for anyone looking for something different because it is very unique, i have seen many novels crash and burn because they fail to set up a different type of story, but i can confidently say that this one peformed outstandingly well. The only thing i didn’t really like was the relationships in the beginning happened way to fast for my taste, but if you continue to read the author gives a good reason to why this happened so don’t drop instantly like i did, continue to read and you may find a diamond in the rough.

LV 14

Zytax

This story is fun to read. This story isnt amazing, but it is fun. The main character is strong, lazy, mischievous and bloodthirsty. This story has funny parts, some sad parts, and heartwarming parts. it's also pretty short. If you're looking for something to kill about 3 hours, that's entertaining, then I recommend this.

LV 10

Lady_Wolvie

Loved this story was a little stranGe at times and The though process of mc was a bit scatTered but still very enjoyable all up.

LV 15

LordGrim_2204

Loved the story just a bit sad that it had to end. The persone who meid it did a greit job at writing it and the story development. But i just wish it had more chapters to read.

Great story😍, the whole story is hilaroius and I love the pacing of it. Its not the best, but you did well. The mc is just to die for, haha. I can't, her reactions to Murkuro are priceless.

LV 13

Sevion

Amazing The story is about Alex who wants to stay away from the plot but always ending up in cliche moments with the plot she is very strong she has ties with very important people there is romance but not a romance at least yet you will have to read to see what I mean but the story is good for a good laid back chill read waiting on the author for more update he gets a stone from me really appreciate you hope you don't drop this and continue with the great story but love the story

LV 5

RUFFI

Haha, this is not the first time I've read this - the inner monologue of the protagonist "(At first she was alarmed that I wanted to learn, but once she saw the determination I had she accepted)". It's funny what kind of determination there can be on the face of a 3-year-old child, does the author really think that if his mother sees his determination she will immediately give her only child to a place where he can break all bones !!!! ???? Or that the instructor will let him do martial arts !!! ?? Children are allowed to study martial arts from 8-11 years old !!!! So that you know, most children up to school age are very weak bodies, no matter whether they are physically fluttering earlier or not, they have a very weak immune system !!!! There are many bacteria, flu and viruses in the air, etc. Children can quickly get sick from a change in temperature and much more !! Children's immunity is very weak and not yet accustomed to the environment !! Every time I read such internal monologues I want to bump my head against the wall, how unrealistic it is !! If the police or government agencies found out about this, the mother of the child could be put to check whether she is capable as a parent !!! When the authors write about children, it is immediately clear that none of them have children and they do not present what it means to take care of a child! The authors may also write that the child is secretly exercising, but did you know that the child is almost always near the mother so that she can look after him so that she can make sure that he is safe !! The authors almost always write that it is disgusting for the main character to drink milk from the breast, but did you know that most of the men in the world dream of sucking on a huge female tits !!!! Translated to google translate!