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What happens when you are tossed around like a rag doll and you open your eyes and discover that you are in a place beyond your imagination or you can do can do things that are impossible" is this real or am I dreaming "AAAAh"
Can Rachel find happiness in a place that she does not call home or will she fade out of existence?
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Hi I am a new author and I am really excited on the journey of my book I hope everyone who reads it will enjoy it please rate and comment it would be appreciated so that I can improve my novels in the future with your feedback. Happy Reading 👍📖😊
The writing quality can be improved, some words that have the same sound but different spelling was used in a certain paragraphs. I love how the story develops, your character design is also good. But what I love the most is the world background, medieval? Edwardian? I'm very interested in those novels who have that aspect. I'm no critic to give critiques, this one is a simple review, thus, as much as I want to comment in every chapter, I'll wait for more to come. Also, I'm a novice writer, let's improve together! Happy writing Author!.
Good story! The grammars are not that bad, but as a person who's grammars also bad, I don't want to judge. The story is really interesting! Keep it up author!