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Became The Secret Mob: Limei's Twist of Love [Closed]
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Synopsis
Caution: Under Revising.
"You're not from around this world, aren't you?"
The male protagonist gripped her chin as her meeting his gaze against her will..
His hard stare was met with her glaring onyx eyes whilst he pulled her closer to stare straight into his sight. She expressed her willingness after her futile resistance. Losing her composure for a brief moment of warmth.
"He is one of the strongest protagonists. One wrong move from him will lead you to your death." She warned herself as she eyed at him carefully.
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Aiylla Shana, who used to be a spoiled brat, lived her life with luxury only privileged that no one has. She was rich, haughty, and selfish. Due to her ill-mannered attitude, the karma played her turning her life into a miserable state, tasting her own medicine, by getting bed-ridden for her whole life. Everyone mocked her on her current stage.
Being bedridden, there's nothing she could do, but to read books in her spare time. Her interests bloom when she started reading and became a writer as her hobby. No one knew she created a world through her writings. In the end, she met her demise with regrets that originated from her past mistakes, and her view of purpose in life.
If only she wasn't hard-headed in the first place, she would have become a writer and continue to finish her book, then live a better life!
As the table turns, she was turned into a mob after her death, transmigrating one of her historical novels she has written. Realizing she was given a second chance, this time she'll live her life to the fullest.
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Volumes:
Volume 1: Slowly Drifting Away 1-40-50
Genre: Urban Romance, Nonfiction
❃ more into MC's flashbacks stories
❃ random scenes
❃ modern life
❃ sad-romance
❃ CEO-type
Volume 2: Dystoria Region (Transmigrated) 40-100-200+
Genre: Contemporary Romance, Eastern Fantasy
❃ MC's Transmigration
❃ Try to stay alive in the fantasy world
❃ A world far from fantasy she had imagined
❃ The Revelation of Truth about her purpose
Volume 3: Back to Earth 300+
Genre: Grim reaper role, Paranormal
❃ Truth Prevails
❃ Chaos of Soul World
❃ Upcoming Crisis
Volume 4: Their Paths Crossed Again 400+
Genre: Action, Mystery - Cultivation
❃ Going back to the world where she mustn't be exists
❃ Rebirth of the Creator
❃ The Tragic Path of her Characters
Volume 5: Unknown Phenomenon 500+
Genre: Action, Supernatural
❃ Cold War between Deities
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Update only after 2-3 days!
A/n: Please always refresh or remove the book and add it again on the library to avoid the old version of the chapters. This book is under revised.. it would be common to see changes on the lines everytime.
Not a translation story, but an original piece of mine.
M18 - this story contains depictions of violence, sexuality, strong language, and/or other mature scenes. This story was also expected dramas, twists n turns, with violent unstable personality such as mood swings, obsessive and possessive from the main characters. So, be warned.
Covers designed by yours truly. The art is an exception. I found it from Pinterest and credits to the owner who owned it. This cover is only for temporary placed.
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A/N: Bear my cringiest for now, this is my first serious draft.
Don't expect too much for this novel, the author here will just bring you down ^^
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Welcome readers࿐ྂ This is an author shamlessly giving herself, 5 stars rated review hehe, I would like to say to thank you all who have been reading my story so far, and please do show your support with honest comments, review and votes! After doing them, I make sure I'll reciprocate ♡ Genres? What type of story or scenes will be on this novel? How legit it is? {Spoiler Alert!} ❃ Reincarnation - one or some of the characters from MC novel! ~ Check! ❃ Transmigration - of the two Main Charcters from the story. ~ Check! ❃ CEO scenes - MC lover ~ Check! ❃ Smart Badass - Female MC!! ~ Check! ❃ Reversed Harem/Harem- FL, MC, and MC lover ~ Check! ❃ "Few" Exciting Boy's Love (BL) scenes ~ Check! ❃ "Few" Crazy Yuri's Love (YL) scenes ~ Check! ❃ Cultivation Method World ~ Check! ❃ Vampires, Demons, Werewolves And many more ♡
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Some constructive points. 1. I love the way you write. I have no opposition to it. Although the onomatopoeia can be managed, it's better and understandable as a layman's term. 2. I love how the story develops, but I like a quick-paced one. Not too quick though, as it may leave plot holes. 3. I notice the side stories, and side cliches and touches, I love how you describe the normality or how you describe the environment the character is in. 4. Build a better world for the novel. You decide how it be better. TBH I like the era the novel went through, and more TBHs, I did not like the theme or the focus of the novel, but this is one of those novels that caught my interest despite not being inside my scope of interest. Keep it up, and make the story better! In a bigger picture though I cannot judge as I have only read a quarter of chapters, but I'm liking it frankly.
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Very profound and well detailed. Author has managed to put together a very promising story. In terms of describing the place, the character, the event, very well made.
Story has great potential as it can be judged by the writer's mature explaination skills,story is damn expressive from the start.. story development needs some attention. Updating stablity is okay for the initation,whilst maintaining the pace of the story! BUT, Believe me you will be loving it,once you get indulged in the story![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Love the flow 😊😊😊😊😊😊💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
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Just from the first chapter I can tell there’s a lot of care and time put in the book, not only that but it has few to no mistakes in grammar or spelling, punctuation could be a bit better but other than that the world ties together well, characters are developed nicely. I’d say 5 stars.
really like the story. hope author will continuously update it. looking forward to it.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😃😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊💞💞
Everything was great the grammar the transition and i love how expressive and descriptive your writing style are which is pretty and gives you more understanding on what's happening. I like strong female leads it's just gives off that one shouldn't underestimate them. First chap gave me a very mysterious feeling which is great. It makes me to know more where the story would progress, It got me totally hooked. I've added it to my libraby waiting for more. Keep up the great wrok. Edit: Wish i could write like you Hehe [img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Ohh my God..... Just lovely the story in terms of the plot so far 10/10 grammar 9.9/10 everything done perfectly I'll definitely be keeping up with this.... Last but not least I looooove how descriptive you are I could vividly imagine everything that was described..... This is a great story.... I love cultivation story that made it even better honesty 20/10 would read again
Honestly, i don't really read this genre, but i love this author's work. it's got me so invested i can't even... really amazing how the story is so put together.
If you want a story that has a lot of potential, then I would recommend this book. The quality is great and the author clearly put a lot of work into this. Good job author keep on writing!
Hi, The story is great. the plot lines are good. It's a plot with a great future. Every scene is intriguing. The first chapter itself makes us to dig more into the story. all the best author.
This story has a lot of potential. I'm looking forward to more. Even thought the reincarnation setting is overused you make us see it in a different light. I really like the characters! Updating regularly too. Hope you continue with this!
I super love it! Even in the first chaps, you'll find yourself digging for more! And it seems so magical and mysterious! I love how the author describes her characters and the transition is also amazing! This is something readers shouldn't miss! Highly recommended!
the plot is great and the concept is awesome... the first chap is epic, and the novel itself is great.. a very recommended novel to read. you will learn to love it as you read.
Wow! What a great story you have. It was amazing if you ask me, though I'm not good at judgment but this story is totally hooked me up. I love the synopsis here keep it up the good work author.
Great story. It begins painting a world and transitions right into the action pretty well. MC is an interesting clever girl. I am curious about her future abilities.
Good Job on your story The story is great it has a potential It's easy to read at dahil wala na akong maidagdag magtatagalog ako para kunware marami akong sinasabi
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Great PLOT author... continue writing! I added this in my library to see the progress. Interesting!
Well story is interesting. where female start her journey as bad spoilt brat. Writer is good at discribing the scenes in very easy to understand way. I'm interested too see how she will turned out after reincarnated as a female lead in the novel she wrote herself. looking forward to read more[img=recommend]
Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, the strong female lead, I do love your writing style and love the fact you try your best to keep us updated on this wonderful story. I personally love Fantasy and ofcourse Romance novels! Will be adding this to my reading list. All being said, keep up the good work.