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A young man and his two brothers were killed in an accident, the older brother has a chance to reincarnate with three wishes, however, not everything goes as planned when a game-addicted goddess likes to play with her destiny, follow the journey of our MC and his brothers around the world of danmachi, they will have to stay together to face the difficulties on their way.
PS: this is my first story and my first language is not English, so don't expect a super reading without errors.
PPS: The PICTURE is not mine I found on Pinterest, if the owner wants me to remove it he can contact me.
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the novel has potential there are few novels that appear isekai with family and also he has powers of hxh that I liked 10/10 harem xdxdxd good novel Reading this novel
I found it very good because it brings several anime references that I like and shows a very original thing about an isekai with brothers. I will wait for more chapters!!
Hey, hey, I will give you an advices. First take your time to write and make sure no grammar in dialogue, monologue or anything no need to be perfect but try make as less as possible and published it. Second study more at how to make good conversation. Look you story is good, well good enough for me, what make it bad is your grammar. It's advices you free to take it or throw it.
A good story with a huge potential what I would like is for you to polish your writing such as grammatical mistakes, gender classification, and others. If you can do that it'll be great.....
Looks pretty good, from a glance even with the few chapters it seems very entertaining. Would love see the future of this. Either way from my view point looks like good concept would love to support it and help more people get to see this. Its very...
creative history, it is difficult to see stories with more than one MC on this site, it has very creative references, even though English is not the best, it is not the first language of the author, I am looking forward to the future of history, waiting for the next chapters.
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Well written, but dropped before it could actually begin. If this fic continues then I recommend reading it but otherwise don't bother.......
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
NO HAREM!! It doesnt matter if i didnt read the story yet. Once i seen NO HAREM in the tags i was hooked instantlyy. .
Hmmmm i still didn't read the book but im gnna try huhuhhuhu.... So i hope that i will not waste my time So author kun do your best~๐๐๐โ๏ธ
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Shameless criticism of the author, my story is not perfect, but I will try my best to be at least fun for the reader, in this story I will try to work on the development of the main and secondary characters, do not expect the protagonist to be an OP god at the beginning , I want the increase in strength to be gradual and constant, I am also planning to help the characters of the family that the MC enters to become stronger, I honestly do not like stories where the companions of the MC can only watch while he is OPNESS, really frustrating. WITHOUT HAREM, at the MAXIMUM two companions, I haven't decided the pair yet, but we will see this throughout history, I think these are the initial considerations, again I hope you like it, without any destructive comments if you can, I just do it for fun. Until the next chapter. ; )