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Did they get the uzumaki freed from cloud?

There's always karin in grass. View More
Red eyed devil · C47
11 hours ago

Spicy_Noodles: Ah, I know where the problem is. The chapters afterwards are getting darker and darker as the pressure is building up for the characters. This is where it was building up to.

That's why the old man is taking it on more seriously. It's following a logical scenario where if in real life you are under a lot of pressure you don't feel as good.

The way I see it is that some things should be taken seriously while others not.

Thanks for pointing it out though. Although unfortunately, a story can't be the same and linear throughout. This is because life is never linear.

Ravenous · C10
1 day ago
I think skipping those six months is a huge missed opportunity. The outbreak itself is the most fun part, after that it's just survival kingdom building just like in the walking dead.

Skipping so much is a missed opportunity View More
Re: Survival (Updated) · C5
1 day ago
I've decided. I'm going to live my life like the apocalypse is happening in half a year.

Plan quick money, prepping and living on the edge is a go lol View More
Re: Survival (Updated) · C1
1 day ago
I don't know what but these later chapters got a different feel to them when compared to the beginning.

Maybe they're shorter, or written slightly different but they feel less engaging than the first few.

I read a lot every day, and I switch between the stories that are updated as they are. The result is that if something is done differently it stands out because you keep double checking if it is still the right story.

Overall your story is great, especially the beginning. There is a levity to it that honestly makes me like the story.

I guess it lost that element or something else later on. Maybe the enthusiasm of old man dudley or yourself is less.

Either way I like your story but there is no denying that what caught my interest about it has faded to the background. As a result I mostly find myself skipping through the story in these later chapters.

I am going to try and zero in on what it's missing that it used to have from now in the hopes of finding it so hopefully you can regain what your story lost.

Man this post sounds dark. Sorry about that! View More
Ravenous · C10
1 day ago
Are you going to genderbend the MC so it fits the contest and becomes a vilainess or will you enter it in the kindomg building contest? View More
Apocalypse Trash · C1
1 day ago
Tbh... I'm getting annoyed at the fact that the MC has not found a way to contact them yet. Or thought to try and use his blood based ability to just fly all the way there.


The second groups adventures are interesting, but I can't stand the MC staying away and taking his time there after so much effort had been put into character building the first group. The one that's in this hospital arc.

I guess it shows they're able to hold their own... Which is likely the point of these chapters.... Sigh... View More
Mutagen · C207
2 days ago
Damn... You're right.. I'd prefer politoad tough View More

Basement_Keeper: Poliwag.......

The World of Pokemon 2.0 · C19
2 days ago
... Freaking politics.... I hope its back to designing and company management soon... View More
The Mech Touch · C1017
3 days ago
Same. A guardian of the forest and her future offspring on your side to secure an ever larger area... View More

DeadEye12: not gonna lie, if i befriended the tree i would create a safe haven there with a mutual benefit of the tree being the guardian and them getting what the tree needs since it can't move

Mutagen · C90
3 days ago

DeadEye12: not gonna lie, if i befriended the tree i would create a safe haven there with a mutual benefit of the tree being the guardian and them getting what the tree needs since it can't move

Mutagen · C90
3 days ago
Guess we know who found the meteor in the middle of nowhere before the army did View More
Mutagen · C66
4 days ago
Looks like an interesting story so far. Formatting and grammar is pretty good. Concept is fun. I look forward to reading more. View More
Apocalypse Trash · C0
4 days ago
Good story so far. I look forward to reading more chapters :) View More
Ravenous · C7
4 days ago
They usually just want a psychic pokemon and eevee lutions are atleast cute unlike most of their competitors.

Tough I prefer him as an evolved pokemon over being some experiment that makes eevee capable of psychic attacks or all lutions.

Unfortunately a lot of people try to cheat by going with multi Lutons experimental eevee...

I used to be quite a fan of eevee but lately that enthusiasm has waned due to it always being the cheat pokemon in the few kanto fics there are.

That or some asshole immediately starts with legendaries n **** or pokemon from other regions entirely.😞

I must admit since an experimental eevee entered the picture I've lost most of my enthusiasm for this fic as a result.

Seeing him cast psychic now is likely to be the final nail... Il try one more chapter out of this fic but I honestly just had it with everyone having cheats and god modes whilst being immature brats, instead of simply intelligent and doing it under their own ability.

That's why I liked this fic initially. The MC was smart enough, a bit of a sneak and simply got things done. Then this arc happened... View More

KindredSpirit: Aaaannnnndddd another pokemon fanfic that have Espeon in them. It's not that I'm saying espeon is bad but there's too many fic that have Espeon, can't they change to umbreon or any of the Eeveelutions?

The World of Pokemon 2.0 · C17
4 days ago

KindredSpirit: Aaaannnnndddd another pokemon fanfic that have Espeon in them. It's not that I'm saying espeon is bad but there's too many fic that have Espeon, can't they change to umbreon or any of the Eeveelutions?

The World of Pokemon 2.0 · C17
4 days ago

KindredSpirit: Ye I read about 20 Pokemon Fics and 15 of them have Espeon

The World of Pokemon 2.0 · C17
4 days ago

nothinsnew: dumb guy why is he acting like ash, following trouble

The World of Pokemon 2.0 · C17
4 days ago
Reading Status: C13
The story is too randomly written. One moment you're in Harry Potter the next you're in marvel the other you're in the hospital again.

There is no real purpose to the story that you'll be able to find at this point in time. Basically this is like having audiobooks split in parts and all hustled together playing in shuffle mode.

Its just so jarring to switch from what is essentially 1 story to then the other. Everytime something interesting happens and you get curious the next chapter comes and it's in another world in a random moment.

Honestly. I had more enjoyment reading stories where I had to puzzle out the meaning of words because of poor grammar than I do reading this story.

The worst thing is that the author is not that bad of a writer. The formatting and grammar are at a good level for webnovel and none of the 3 stories he is juggling with is actually bad in concept.

The problem is really that this really is like listening to several audiobooks on a playlist in shufflemode. One moment your Harry Potter the next you're some random self insert playing superhero in marvel then you're in the hospital... Its just...

I respect the writer but this fic has been too poorly executed. View More
I jump in and out of Harry Potter world .
4 days ago
The return home feels quite rushed... That said. I like the story so far. View More
Red eyed devil · C36
4 days ago
... This is like a ****ty cliffhanger ending or something.

He gets ko. Ends up in other worlds but keeps switching between the two in the most jarring manner...

I like the inserts but only as stand alone. Together like this just hasn't worked so far.

It reads like someone keeps slamming bricks in my head everytime the world is switched View More
I jump in and out of Harry Potter world . · C0
5 days ago
Same, notification tab fills up so fast and I'm not even an author lol.

But yeah that's the gist of it :) View More

CompleteNoob: Although I already wrote this, but I will take this suggestion seriously, especially since I have planned to separate the MC from the canon at the start which was a bit tricky. But Main quest huh? If I have to say his quest to beat his father is more of a side quest...

If I have to say then the main quest of this novel is for the MC to reach the top, not only in power but also in influence to survive/Live without worries so he can protect his loved ones *nods* I will think about it some more about what main goal I can give the MC since when he came to the DxD world all he focus and still focus on is to have power to survive regardless of what come his way. As I move along the novel I am discovering a few things, like what dreams the girls want according to their personalities.

But thanks for the heads up, although I only spotted this reply because my notification tab is cramped with messages lol

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories
5 days ago

CompleteNoob: Although I already wrote this, but I will take this suggestion seriously, especially since I have planned to separate the MC from the canon at the start which was a bit tricky. But Main quest huh? If I have to say his quest to beat his father is more of a side quest...

If I have to say then the main quest of this novel is for the MC to reach the top, not only in power but also in influence to survive/Live without worries so he can protect his loved ones *nods* I will think about it some more about what main goal I can give the MC since when he came to the DxD world all he focus and still focus on is to have power to survive regardless of what come his way. As I move along the novel I am discovering a few things, like what dreams the girls want according to their personalities.

But thanks for the heads up, although I only spotted this reply because my notification tab is cramped with messages lol

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories
5 days ago
Good chapter. You did leave a large paragraph of Russian language in Russian tough. View More
Red eyed devil · C15
1 week ago
Oh boy... How is he going to explain all this to the others x) View More
The World's Rebirth · C26
1 week ago
You should add a few more prologue chapters. Four is not enough. View More
Supreme Magus · C4
1 week ago
He's not a cat, he's a well oiled lovin' machine! ;p View More

MrBruno: Haha lucky is the sweetest cat and never find troubles

The Mech Touch · C1003
1 week ago
Stockholm syndrome incoming :) View More
The World's Rebirth · C24
1 week ago
Hohoh he's becoming cold and calculating :o

The question is... Why now and not in his prior life?
Did the mutart mess with his head? View More
The World's Rebirth · C23
1 week ago

sekach: Congratulations for 1000th chapter! We hope to see more exciting adventures. Story had great potential for it.

The Mech Touch · C1000
1 week ago
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