DCU: Rise of Ultron

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LV 5

SR_2027

I love the personality of Mc. He's not some naive fool. He uses his mind and plan out things. Although he is affected by emotions, it doesn't get in his way or disturbs his plan. Hope he stays the same. Through his powers are growing, he still is very weak compared to some Villians or let alone supervillain. He should slow down his pace and wait out to become atleast more powerful. With how DC heroes works, they will first try to capture mc and then interrogate him. Even if he defeated any single super hero, the rest of the Justice League will come running after him like a pack of Hyenas... There are some few mistakes but it can be ignored. The story so far is pretty good and interesting. With interesting background and development along with character development.

LV 4

randomguy01

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LV 1

ThePandaCritic

The pacing is 0 to 100 real quick. While I do like time skip I see the author skipping some stuff which I think could be pretty interesting. Did I miss something where is Ultron?

LV 4

Orino

The story was going fine and I was very much looking forward to reading more. But with only 8 chapters of the story and 6 chapters of useless nonsense and excuses, I very much feel tricked into reading this story. As I started reading the story because I saw there were at least 14 chapters to read.

LV 14

BlackSwordman1234

Like this more than the Darkseid one for some reason. I like that the character uses science and his own intelect to become powerful. Although, I wonder just how powerful he can become once he has all of the serums. Still, I hope he breaks Batman’s stupid code.

LV 4

TheUnkindledOne

It's going good so far. I've spent reading so many stories with bad grammar that this actually makes me happy to see a good Fan-Fiction. I want to read more. I hope you continue writing I also read you're newest novel being Mcu: Darkseid also great novel I'm liking it.

LV 4

xlvlx

Great start and has potential. The only problem i think is the nerf u did on the mc. 20mins to recover from a cut is way too long and since he can only take a dose every year this is looking pretty bad since he is in DC. Imagining of the future opponents he will face, he will need to wait years to even touch them.

LV 13

GRANDMAESTA_30

so far so good.

LV 11

TitanicLichChicken

An excellent story by an author balancing his time writing other stories. Good quality writing and grammar. Excellent story and character development in only a few chapters.

LV 4

Skilledweb_47978

The overall concept is nothing new but creates something that feels fresh. I have to say it's one of the far more interesting FF and I'm curious to see where it will go in the future. can't really say much about updating stability if there's only 5 chapter ATM.

LV 12

EpimetheusBB

Great novel. I can't be bothered making a real review though. ********************************************************

LV 4

Carnic_321

a few things 1 so far (3 chapters) its good 2 is science not different in DC compared to marvel? 3 is there Romance and/or harem (hopefully no harem and if there is Romance hopefully it’s someone as ruthless as him) 4 Pls for the love of god dont drop this uh that’s it i think? oh yeah MC should check if he has the Meta Gene

LV 3

Franco_La_cruz

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LV 1

MrXmc

Not my cup.................................................................................................................................................

LV 5

LifelessMan

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LV 4

Jonathan_Lam_2034

the author is clearly lazy and doent bother with updates anymore im quite dissapointed with him he did the same with his mcu one