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A teenager named ALFAEYZA who is nicknamed the "troublemaker" wants to be determined to be a useful person in the future.
This occurs due to the selfishness of a father who wants his son to be a very smart person, capable of defending more than professional people and all things that exceed normal human limits. Until the father gave formula injection to his son.
However, what happens if the formula is given is not correct? Will the child be able to realize this determination?
"Feelings of disappointment, loss, hopelessness and other negative things can have a bigger positive impact in the future."
~~ ALFAEYZA ~~
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Cool!!! This story recommended for you. Anti mainstream story, and I will tell you about spoiler from this story in bahasa. Alfa will meet a 'person' who have the same face and have a power too. [img=exp]
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Yeay, finally this story is in english. I'm really really waiting for him. I'm sure the story is no less cool than the bahasa version. congrats thor and keep spirit for updating your story. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I like this story!!! [img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins]
The story is really good, I always get carried away every chapter of the story! the mood, plot and characterization are perfect !!🥰🥰🥰 pokoknya suka banget!! Gak tau lagi harus ngmg apa,cerita kakak ini gak pernah fail😭
Very interesting book, i am waiting for the next chapter... come on guys, this book is very recommended ..... Read this book 👍👍👍👍👍👍
i like your story thor.. walau butuh waktu extra untuk paham..maklum bahasa inggris aku dilevel menengah ke bawah thor..go go thor..fighting
I really like this genre. Her story is so interesting that she wants to keep reading. What's the title. make someone really curious to use it
I haven't read the Indonesian ver but from what I read so far plus the blurb, the plot seems interesting! One thing from me is I found some Indonesian word that haven't been edited, maybe you miss them when you edited the chapter before posting them. Some of the words you chose not really fit the context but it's okay. English is hard and I'm still learning too. I recommend using grammarly to help you proofread 🥰 Good job author! Keep writing 💕💕
a very interesting and cool story. the language is light and easy to understand. really recommend once .... .............., ... ...............
I like this story.. The story very have good idea. The description also nice, and like with the dialouge. Overall is almost perfect. And good job for author. and dont forget for chapter update Good luck and succsess for you, author. KSIndra.
Highly recommended!!! Wow, loved it! This book is amazing and very interesting. You must read this novel!!! Keep up the good work author🤩🤩
cool, how the author describes such a complex story line. it is a masterpiece, one must attach credit to this exquisite masterpiece. 😎😎😎😎❤️❤️👌👌👌
Congrats kakak. I hope you can succes with this story hehehe. Keep spirit kakak. Do the best [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
an extraordinary novel, making me always want to know the continuation of the story, for the first time I read a novel with the sci-fi genre it turned out to be very interesting.
Finally I found an English novel which is interesting and has a unique diction. Keep the spirit of writing, sis. Readers are definitely waiting for your work
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Hello I am the author of this story. I hope you can like this story, and if you want to review in Indonesian or something else, that's also welcome. We can learn other languages too xixixi. So, don't forget to support this story. Thank you. [img=exp][img=coins]