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The Omega Evolves

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Omegas are known as the weaklings of a pack, What if they are not? What if their purpose is more than that? What if they don’t make the park weak but make them a lot stronger when given the chance to?
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° You’re nothing but a piece of trash, You do not deserve to live you weakling!

° You dare bring in a Human into our territory!? You’re a useless Omega who brings nothing but trouble!

° Hmm, Fresh Meat are we allowed to take a taste out of him? Ha-ha, I’m sure he’s still a virgin.

° NO one touches my friend, you say all humans and omegas are weak alike, yet you need us. Why don’t you all do us a favor and leave all weaklings alone!
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Running was all they could do, after all they’re said weak, they can’t fight back.

Holding onto his best friends hands together they ran, running from the bullies who have tortured them since they could remember. Even when running, they were being taunted.

° Don’t trip boys or our fun will be reduced, we can’t let that happen right boys? Blue said.

° Fall flat on your face it would make the chase easier ha-ha

° Stop running and come to dad let me fill you with my pups ha-ha even though you can’t conceive I’ll like to try my luck

° Don’t look back, it’ll slow us down, and we’ll get distracted, we can’t afford to get distracted at a time like this.

Not watching where they were going, they tripped making them fall down over a cliff. The cliff was said to have no end, it was called The Deep Liberty Cliff for a reason. Falling, there was only one thought running through the Omegas mind and that was to protect his Human friend who has always been by his side from the beginning. Someone who didn’t run when he found out that he was a Werewolf. Grabbing his friend, he held him to his chest making sure they were falling backwards with his back facing the unknown ground that lies below.

A powerful Bang was heard around the woods the cause was none other than The Omegas back landing on the forest floor with the force of gravity. His eyes wide open, blood dripping from his lips, his eyes staring into the eyes of his friend who layed on top of him. His eyes closing out of reflex succumbing to the darkness. Leaving his human friend to fend for himself.

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Your_Royalty

Although this book just started but i couldn't stop my fingers from typing and voting at the same time. This is a novel that has been written so the readers would understand easily ,although some errors it is still beautifully crafted. The scene looks real i could place myself in their shoes, and fell what they were felling. Cox character although weak, I'm sure he would grow into a strong Protagonist I'm loving Bill's character and it is making me eager to know how much more he would grow. Defeating two beasts in a day with the help of his newly bought dagger was a good composition. Maybe you should give the dagger a cool name. That would be meant for bill alone Keep up the good work dear Author...Wishing you many inspiration ahead. ✨👍[img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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caia_clearwood

The author did an excellent job of conveying the emotions of the characters. However, it would have been better if the synopsis is more like a blurb instead of a scene or dialogue. Its a nice sneek peak into the story but more suited for an expert or teaser.

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Cherin_Kauma

Interesting novel. From the start it impressed me. The writing is neat and the language is also easy to understand. You're really cool, author[img=recommend]

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Your_Royalty

Oh My! I totally didn't see that coming ! Bill liking Cox was unexpected! Shit!! I'm screaming and dying to find out more! Write one more chapter today !. My dear fellow Nigerian give me a sneak peek at tomorrow's chapter! I'm so eager to find out more. I'm also enjoying the Afterlife I laughed my ass of when i saw it. Damn how did you come up with that!? How will Cox react after hearing Bill? 😂 Keep it up, I want more!

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Rexburg

Giving you a 5 star rating since no one will🤭 Beautiful work keep it up. Try this book out you'll end up liking it. Drum roll!! Give this Author some Encouragement!

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CaptainChaos0301

There are some grammatical errors, but i know that the author will improve. Aside from that, I think this is worth your time and I will gladly encourage you to pick up this novel. I love the storyline PERIOD. Now go read the book.

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Reality_Rae

This book is a promising one and i could feel it. Beautifully crafted characters, nice beast description. This specifically captured my attention and i can't help but say I'm impressed. The defeating although i would say they're going a little fast. Especially when it came to the tenth chapter where he defeated the spider, Even with the dagger, he should have at least been injured. But one thing i deduced from the whole killing of two beasts was the dagger has a life of its own, it feels like it knows this beasts and their weaknesses so dear Author i would love you to explain better except i already said the answer and it was meant to come as a surprise. 🙈 Sorry if it was. Keep up the good work tho, More Inspiration 💪

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