Journey Into One Piece

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EvilCompanion

i couldnt read until chapter 2 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Dekxz

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Buggy_The_Clown

Nice fanfic man and the timeline is also interesting hope you will not drop it

LV 12

SaeedKH

Thanks for the great work. Continue and improve your ✍️ ,as you have a great talent that you shouldn’t neglect your innate talent. Best luck with you✌🏻.

LV 1

Kunutunukeks

Dude, you are good at writing this story, from the very first chapter I got sucked in and I hope everything will be the same, I advise you to read the story that is worthy))

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Rockleestar

I like how the story begins...there is no op system and the character development is quite acceptable..good translation..i hope the story will be good ..keep up the good works...😊😊ok for now.

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malik_kuan

Trash story Trash story Trash story Trash story Trash story Trash story Trash story Trash story Trash story Trash story Trash story Trash story

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Nafsu_geass28

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

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FOURTY_SEVEN

NEXT [img=coins][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update]

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UchihaZenn

Good novel .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................

LV 14

GAMING_IS_MUST

world background and update stability get 5 stars cause it's a fanfic but seriously writing quality is like you used Google translate to translate it to English or something. there is shitty character development that there is no character development he just doesn't have a fixed personality he just keeps doing random things, behaves like a rich wuxia youngmaster overall it's shit couldn't read it past Ch 15

LV 3

Ryan_Dragneel

oh shit. I haven't written any reviews and comments until now due to seeing the progress of the story. And you could say this is one of the best One Piece fanfics. Maintain and hopefully have a long chapter without reducing the quality of the story. Good job.💪💪💪

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CosmoLuz

if u saw this comment this is a sign that u fucking need to read this XPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXXPXPXPXPXPXPXPX----------------------------------------------

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_Cooldude_

A good one piece fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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kobeblackmamba

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LV 3

Buggy_The_Clown

Nice story and i like the time line 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😒👌😒😒👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

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Aztec_Azazel

am glad you stopped writing this abomination 🙂

LV 4

Lackada1sical

Evaluation: Above Average WQ: Several noticeable gramm errors & inconsistencies, however, author-san is improving on it as it goes on. A well thought storyline, plus long chapters. 4/5 SD: With an average to fast pace development without affecting the story & MC progression. This is a pre-cannon storyline which is quite good as author-san is building his own story. 5/5 CD: MC is not dependent (Mythical Zoan/logia lightning/Fenrir) on his DF as he also uses his foreknowledge of OP-verse plus his high intelect and out of the box strats' which help him overcome the schemes and plot of OP-verse. MC has a chaotic-neutral persona which is apt on OP-verse. 5/5 US: Author-san must've encountered the well known disease of a mental/writer's block. 3/5 WB: Different DF were used/discussed which is good. Lack of adventure/exploration of other islands. 4/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

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Daoist571053

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Daoist571053

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