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The villainess is worse the second time around
4.55 (27 ratings)
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She’s the knight who sacrificed everything for her country. He’s the Emperor who watched her die.
Lucia is sentenced to death for a crime she didn’t commit. But as fate would have it, she is brought back in time with a second chance to get her revenge.
Keitel is the boy who would be Emperor. A seemingly cold Prince who can’t afford to fail. When a mysterious young man appears in front of him, he can’t seem to look away.
The violent clash between the hot and cold pair will leave an unforgettable mark on their world. As one side gears up for the ultimate betrayal, will Lucia and the Prince be able to overcome their differences in time? Read on to find out...
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Keitel staggered unsteadily to his feet and loomed over Lucia. His palm slammed down heavily on the door behind.
He was so close Lucia could feel his breath on her neck. She shuddered. His hair escaping over his eyes, he looked down on Lucia. Keitel's face was slightly red.
"I said get out." He breathed.
Lucia stared back into his piercing blue eyes unwaveringly. Keitel sniffed and pulled in close. His skin brushed against Lucia's cheek. His hot breath tickled her ear.
"You really had me fooled." He whispered. "Is this still part of your game?"
Lucia tried to move away. His other hand came down on the door...
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Quick update: I now have new stories which are spinoffs from this one:
1.) Making the demon lord love me - This is a story that follows Clover as the main character and is set after this novel ends. If you're curious about what happens to Lucia and the others, you can find out here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/making-the-demon-lord-love-me_20209849305073805
2.) Summoning a wicked wizard - a new romance with Michael and some new characters:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/summoning-a-wicked-wizard_21394369505128005#review
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This is a 5 star book! It contains many complex characters and a fearless FL. the book also has a fast pace. i normally get bored really fast but I’m hooked 😍
The story was engaging till the very end. Very good work, author-nim! Can anyone please explain the ending to me? Why did Lucia say what she said? Is there a possibility of volume 3?
So far (chapter 12), I think this story is very pleasant to read. The description of scenarios and emotions is different from other novels I usually see. Mainly, I like the protagonist's personality. Cold, but not like an iceberg. She has strong emotions like someone else. But at the same time, I think it was all too rushed (like ,a kiss in chapter 12??), I wanted better character development beyond the protagonist, especially the ML! It's just my opinion, but I think he fell in love very fast. Yes, in the history, several months have passed. But I didn't see every little interaction the two had, so it looked a little forced.
I have been enjoying the story this far. I appreciate how flawed the main character is, and I appreciate the growth that has taken place. Things don't come to her just because she's the lead, but because they all work for it. There's a fair bit of mystery and intrigue. I think at times the flow is a bit off, with the occasional grammatical errors, but overall, very good.
Hi, I just wanna say that I really like this novel. I'm giving out a FIVE stars for it. I love how it was written, I love how the characters was developed, I love how the background is decribed, and I just think that it came well all together. Good Job Author!
ohmygod finally a story with a strong female lead!!! I read the first chapter and it kept wanting me to read more!!! The story and the writing style is amazinggg keep it up!!
Beautiful work. I love how strong Lucia is as a character, as well as a female lead. She doesnt play to any weaker sterotypes, she is driven, and bold, and I really like that. I also enjoy how well paced the plot it. You get enough world building and events to keep you enaged, whilst simultaneously wondering where the story will go. A real hook. Quality of writing is also excellent. I dont think I have a bad word to say about this book! Amazing work author!
It's a good story. The writing quality is rather good, as is the plot development and the characters. You've put some good work into the story. Good job.
Although reincarnated villainess is a cliché trope, I really enjoyed reading your story. Nice chapter one, a punch to the gut if I may add. Enough descriptions to let the readers imagine the world building. Overall, a good job.
Hey, I think this is a lovely fantasy romance. We feel that the MC got wrongfully accused right off the bat, and it makes us want to see if she can correct that. I've pointed out some minor punctuation mistakes for you, be sure to check them out. Keep up the good work.
So here it is! This story is addictive. It felt like I was watching a movie similar to G. O. T or some interesting Greek/Roman themed movie. Totally captivating. This author knows what he/she is doing. Rooting for you. Please don't drop [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is good, how the author write the detailed action is really great! At first it seems like a story about revenge but, the main focus on it was how the main character prevent the worst case scenario from future to happen again. Good work and keep writing! :D
This novel is really unique and I'm loving it! :D The plot is excellent and I love how relatable the characters are. I haven't read a story like this before but you've totally drawn me in Good work!!
This story is a true work of art. The plot is very unique and different to the things I've read in the past. Anything can happen, so the readers are always at the edge of their seats. Great work Author!
Wow.. an amazing book.. author is doing pretty well with this.. everything is good and perfect.. loved it..support the author..keep it upp..
Very nice MC. This story shows no matter good you are, you'll always meet bad people. The characters are well-defined. Nothing seems to be off, when it comes to grammar. Just minor. That's all I could say basing from level of criticism.
hooked me from the first chapter itself.. the main character dying and travelling back to 15 years ago.. 😍 tbh I love trasmigration, rebirth and time travel novels. n this one is going into my library. 5 stars because it deserves it. keep going author 🤗
Discriptive wiriting, smooth flow, not too fast, not too slow, overall a good quality book. Keep up the good work!!!!! . . . . . . . . . . . .
I am captivated by the story! More exposure will surely make this novel more popular in the future! I think we all have potentail and I can see it in your book! Loving every chapter it has!