Tenshi no akuma

I think it’s pretty good for a start and if will become a lot better over time however it needs more character development and new characters so then they can make it more about the people and the story but it’s pretty good so far but really dose need more character development and maybe add people from the new guild or the the possible future of the tower if knowledge thing

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will_nolan151

since I wrote it I think it is really good and u should read it , it basically hade every fantasy thing in it like , elf's , dwarves, seers, and many more