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I really love how clear the descriptions are in this story. The way you portray the different emotions is totally on point and it adds some serious muscle to the already great writing quality. Keep it up!
The descriptions in this novel are on point. The author is very good at conveying emotions and the bleakness evident in the world of the characters. The only issue so far is there are not that many chapters to get a conclusive picture of the story yet, but that'll be easily solved with more updates. But overall its an intriguing read.
The story is told in a way that i imagined myself in every scene, the descriptions made by the writer were on point. Its worth adding to your library and checking out, only problem now is i need more chapters🥺
Something that really shines in this novel is the description. The way the author writes is flawlessly beautiful and creates an atmosphere of mystery, tranquility and even is even chilling at times. I like how a lot of the mystery surrounding the book is drawn out, and as the plot thickens you only get immersed deeper and deeper. I would perhaps like to see more variations in sentence construction, or a bit more world building to be implemented at the start, just so the reader gets a full understanding of what is going on, but this really was a pleasure to read.
The book is really worth a try. The author has a great way of telling the story that whenever I read them, I feel like I am being transported to that very place that the story describes. I love to read more of your story, please keep updating.
This novel made me imaginative and my imagination works in this kind of novels. The grammar was okay and little to no mistakes were seen. It has nice narration and the characters are well fleshed out. Good job!