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Have you ever felt like everything you once had coming back to you, but then shattered in the blink of an eye? Well, that was the life Rina, a 16-year-old girl, was living until a day came where an angelic guy saves her from taking her last breath.
This guy wasn't just angelic, he was the new bad boy at her school plus the leader of a vigilante crew called "Dark Knights" with the help of his best friend who's a hacker, a genius and very rich.
This vigilante crew was a force to protect females who couldn't protect themselves against any threat toward them.
The way this vigilante crew was secured and had an advanced system, they were even working with an undercover force called "Dark Society" which protects the world in the shadows.
Meeting this person changed Rina a lot. Turning her into something new, something better. That slowly they grew closer and closer that they both asked themselves, "Is This First Love?".
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I love the book🥰🥰 Anytime I'm bored I read it over and over again which makes me feel much better. Thanks author, you're doing a great job. We'll be there for you always❤.
Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! 😉
that's an amazing and heart touching story. majority of people get their 1st love in school life. looking farward to this novel and will keep it in my library.
YAHOO! I’M THE 10TH PERSON TO MAKE A REVIEW! Anyway, just wanted to say how much your book inspires me, dear author. Your book is interesting and I can’t wait for More! Keep up the excellent work![img=recommend]
I think that this story has a fair but of potential and author does take care to update consistently. The only critique is the grammatical errors but the author has already commented on that and said they will be fixing them!
This is the story of high school romance - a bully, the attraction, the chase... It sure starts out incredibly fast-paced and I'm glad for the reference to mental health. It reminds me a bit of "13 Reasons Why" plus "To All the Boys I've Loved Before" (both Netflix shows). Would be interesting to see more!
It's dizzying, the dialogues I mean. But! it's a nice start! Nice plot too! And the writing is so awesome! It's quite detailed Anyway it's freakin good!!
Great story, you've done a perfect job showing the settings and the important messages in the story. Overall it's a great story, keep up the great work :)
Great read, left me hanging though. Write more chapters! Only problem I can see is minor spelling errors, though they can be easily fixed. Just use Grammarly or something when writing in the future, helps a lot with common writing mistakes and such. Keep it up, author!
The first and second part made me surprise and I was like, "Oh wait... somebody just died?" LOL Your narration is decent, there is still a lot of more room for improvements but this is a pretty good novel that I will be looking forward to. Keep writing!
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Thanks to everyone that has play there part in helping me to create this amazing and beautiful story! My grammar is not well, but I will see to it that I correct what needs to be corrected. If sees any mistakes always be sure to give a feedback so I can correct it. Please be sure to support my book, leave a comment on paragraph, chapters and also a review. Remember to share, vote and add to library! I hope all my readers will enjoy! And be safe:)!